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She walked into a haze,
unclearly seeing, as
shadows leapt and played,
distorting, she believing,
she was alone.

She wailed into the maze,
“where am I?”, hearing
echoes misbehave,
getting louder, yet,
sounding so lonely.

She whispered in a daze,
“who am I?”, surely
it was a mistake, played
cruelly on a soul,
who is alone.

She wheeled about, amazed,
an answer! Comforting,
and proudly displayed,
were friends’ names,
no longer lonely.

Erin Moen
2/5/03
Copyright 2003 ©

Wednesday, February 5, 2003

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Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

wonderful work

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

This was such a wonderful well written piece, God BLess
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2003

very short nice style. Every so often a poem of beauty crops up that would suit a down and dirty bassline and a lou reed style song circa the 70s this is another.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

:) You are all so dear, in so short of a time, as to amaze...I love the interpretations but, this piece, as several others of mine, reflects on the "amazing grace" which befell me, when I got my used computer, and could start communicating, with the world, with my peers, with humanity. Regardless of what horrors technology has wrought, it has also brought, joy into MY life. And, really, what is more important than the ultimate "I"? So unique, all of us...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

life smacks us in the face and then hugs us...

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Love the way you write Miz Erin....Just so damn different...and imaginative...Ty, Dani

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Erin your style is so unique it's a joy to read;-)

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Very nice!
Jack

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Great write Erin, its tough being alone.
Nancy

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Sometimes it's easy to make friends
very hard to loose one.
Great write!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Hiya Air! Love your style girl! Excellent write as always! hugs - Tee

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Wonderful writing Erin...Floria

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

lovely! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) you write SO well...if i had your talent...i'd be blessed.

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

very good write, says someone who has often walked with a group to the front lines and turned around, only to find herself standing alone. It's good to have back-up.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

another beauty erin

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

I like this one very much, Erin.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Oh Erin another beauty you do these so well love your style
Peg

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