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Las Vegas Reels

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, March 2, 2003

 

Shades of envy and greed
Stroll behind my need,
As I examine my dirty fingers,
Marveling to see, myself so soiled,
And liking it...

Till of shadowed quarters,
Tinkling into rhymes,
Hitting reels confined
To thoughts between the line,
I'm loving it...

Metallic lights sublimed,
Sinking into mind,
Leaving tastelessness behind,
A parody of mine,
And I'm hating it...

Erin Moen
3/2/03
Copyright 2003 ©  

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
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Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Lost Wages, what I call Vegas, 'cause it's true - hard enough to come up with money in the first place, what makes one think I want to throw it away on frivalous frippery? Bad enough throwing it at the gas station and grocery store: everything keeps going up except the paycheck!!!! Can't afford to gamble. Even a dollar lottery ticket out of the budget. :(

An excellent write, Erin.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on March 3, 2003
This was excellent! ;) Silver

PS: Ghosts are my kind of thing..lol. Thank you for the lovely comments. ;)

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 3, 2003
poem of the day

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on March 3, 2003
In Las Vegas it's easy to lose everything! Great poem.
Sandy

Reviewed on March 3, 2003
This was wonderful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on March 3, 2003
"And I'm hating it..." Yep, that's me. I'm so not a gambler. I cringe as my money disappears. Love the subtle rhyme scheme.

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on March 2, 2003
lots of layers here, nicely done

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 2, 2003
Very Nice!
Jack

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 2, 2003
WONDERFUL WRITE

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 2, 2003
Hope you didn't loose too much $$$
Excellent!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 2, 2003
you are a high flyer;-)excellent imagery...


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