"blue burns", she "wonders how others see blue"/have seen it's gentleness/but FEEL and have 'seen' 'blue' distress, spurned, scared, just as this, haunting, my friend, aches inside this one, all too much, so extraordianry a Poet/holding a mirror up to what I see...beautifully written, and so powerfully painful, as if one should ask, you, oh...how did you know this about me, Erin, oh ((((Erin))))....
Right into the gut of this 'blue' ...you are amazing, and more...
I, you are NOT ALONE AND (((((ERIN)))))) for WHEN YOU ARE 'BURNING BLUE', in AWE of the insight and words that you form so exquisitely, powerfully honest and truly just floored...
Love,
mi

what a prism of colors writen with just one tint
blue also is the color for higher communication and self expression
So I give this poem A Blue

Erin, so blue she sees nothing but blue. excellent flow.
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She sadly sees blue a very dark blue.

"...Blue
is deemed
smoothly cool,..."

The color of the Ocean.
Well done.

~E

"Blue Burns" creates emotion when the eyes of reader see it, and the drums of the heart rebate the sounds.
Wonderful piece.
My respect and admiration.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

The alliteration is nice, it adds a certain flow to the poem that makes it roll like water. Bravo.

P.S.- I see it like Miles Davis.