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Currentness of Time (Edited slightly...finished)

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

I feel like a jaded, old rock singer, harping on my views, so I will bring this one back to the top, since it wrote itself right before I was going to the grocery store this morning, to my relief in the feelings my muse had exited the building, but thus confusing my days time-line, adding to my friction, and developing into a neurosis, of sorts, and, in the end, being a catharsis, to a frusrated soul who has to raise children in the now of Now. Thank you for listening, and replying to my split-agony personality. My obtuseness frequently prevails, in my glass house, in my world, to my chagrin. And, yet, to think and feel the horror of the people going through the War, tonight/today/in the past/the present/the future/the Omega of a Time, is such a counterpoint to the nowness of the beauty in my life, it is an injustice, all its own.

Thursday, March 27, 2003

I hear the mutterings and the protests,
against the acts of violence,
to achieve
the facts of peace,
and I listen to ghostly voices,
from our earthly past, as
the wailings from death-filled cattle cars,
echo in my mind,
but unheard, in their currentness of Time.

I see the screamings and the emotions,
and the use of acts of violence,
to achieve
the facts of peace,
and I view visions of brutal rice-fields,
from our worldly past, as
the ka-chunk of bullets through bodies
pass before my eyes,
but unseen, in their currentness of Time.

I feel the bravery and the convictions,
and the painful acts of violence,
needed to achieve
the fact of peace,
and I feel humanity’s vaulted yearnings,
throughout our past, as
the liberation from terror and oppression,
sings into my heart,
seen by all, in our Currentness of Time.

Erin Moen
3/27/03
Copyright 2003 ©




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Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (author) 3/27/2003

Wow Erin....you did this so well...good powerful write and I love the structure of it. and repetitions..great work..floria




Reviewed by Elizabeth Lucas-Taylor (author) 3/27/2003

Nicely done, Erin




Reviewed by Oisín Breen (author) 3/27/2003

àh interesting thoughts.
and good good




Reviewed by Peggy Bertrand (author) 3/27/2003

Erin, very depth in message and the sadness. Excellent
Peg




Reviewed by Paul Berube (author) 3/27/2003

Erin, very thoughtful write. The really sad part is that when the war is over these same people will take up another cause to protest. I hear it's a full time job and helps the economy.




Reviewed by Tony Nerone (author) 3/27/2003

Good Morning, Erin
Excellent write with emotion. These protestors are really becomming sickening. There is no draft, so why do they worry. Our military is now all volunteer. i am anti war but our people are there, they should be home praying for our people. Stupid SOB's.
Sorry for my vent.


tony


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Reviewed by Marvin Kirsh
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Dear Erin-You seen according to my own thoughts exactly to the point in all of your writing. You cannot breed peace with violence, a bulls eye of you get the right trouble-why are the so many bullets of the uncurrent time? You might not have though of or it be known to you but the churches use a method of an "organ clockwork' that works in this manner to solve its troubles of mostly disturbing voices that travel. But the method thought not violent only grows more trouble.
I ahve seen in the uncurrentness of time men of the rank of high eductional intellect armed within this uncurrentness in defense of mistaken indentity and an internal diisturbing voice that projects from them-I assume could as easily occupy and be targeted on a cattle car and treated as violently as rubbush though men of great honor.
That our lesson and test is already failed. Why would a man fire a bullet into a cattle car-my opinion is he either has a very limited biew and perspective of the incident and the entire earth/and or is seeking a quick scotre like at a bar or in a sweepstakes-trying this way doesnt cost anything?

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
it has 'slightly' improved from a finsihed and good piece to a finsihed and even better piece.
Stick with my thoughts. very intersting

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Erin, excellent write.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
A terrific poem Erin. You did project primal instincts. What we can be like when the mask we wear is ripped away. How cruel man is to man. bill

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
This is a poem that gave me recollections of visit to Nancy France and the Natzi prison there. The smell of human flesh has lasted over decades to remind us that satan walks this earth in different forms.
Your poem is awesome .

Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
soulful drop, poet. you captured something primal, here. keep writing.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Well done Erin!
Jack


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