Currentness of Time (Edited slightly...finished)
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
I feel like a jaded, old rock singer, harping on my views, so I will bring this one back to the top, since it wrote itself right before I was going to the grocery store this morning, to my relief in the feelings my muse had exited the building, but thus confusing my days time-line, adding to my friction, and developing into a neurosis, of sorts, and, in the end, being a catharsis, to a frusrated soul who has to raise children in the now of Now. Thank you for listening, and replying to my split-agony personality. My obtuseness frequently prevails, in my glass house, in my world, to my chagrin. And, yet, to think and feel the horror of the people going through the War, tonight/today/in the past/the present/the future/the Omega of a Time, is such a counterpoint to the nowness of the beauty in my life, it is an injustice, all its own.
Thursday, March 27, 2003
I hear the mutterings and the protests,
against the acts of violence,
to achieve
the facts of peace,
and I listen to ghostly voices,
from our earthly past, as
the wailings from death-filled cattle cars,
echo in my mind,
but unheard, in their currentness of Time.
I see the screamings and the emotions,
and the use of acts of violence,
to achieve
the facts of peace,
and I view visions of brutal rice-fields,
from our worldly past, as
the ka-chunk of bullets through bodies
pass before my eyes,
but unseen, in their currentness of Time.
I feel the bravery and the convictions,
and the painful acts of violence,
needed to achieve
the fact of peace,
and I feel humanity’s vaulted yearnings,
throughout our past, as
the liberation from terror and oppression,
sings into my heart,
seen by all, in our Currentness of Time.
Erin Moen
3/27/03
Copyright 2003 ©
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Reader Reviews for "Currentness of Time"
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (author) 3/27/2003
Wow Erin....you did this so well...good powerful write and I love the structure of it. and repetitions..great work..floria
Reviewed by Elizabeth Lucas-Taylor (author) 3/27/2003
Nicely done, Erin
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (author) 3/27/2003
àh interesting thoughts.
and good good
Reviewed by Peggy Bertrand (author) 3/27/2003
Erin, very depth in message and the sadness. Excellent
Peg
Reviewed by Paul Berube (author) 3/27/2003
Erin, very thoughtful write. The really sad part is that when the war is over these same people will take up another cause to protest. I hear it's a full time job and helps the economy.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (author) 3/27/2003
Good Morning, Erin
Excellent write with emotion. These protestors are really becomming sickening. There is no draft, so why do they worry. Our military is now all volunteer. i am anti war but our people are there, they should be home praying for our people. Stupid SOB's.
Sorry for my vent.
tony
I ahve seen in the uncurrentness of time men of the rank of high eductional intellect armed within this uncurrentness in defense of mistaken indentity and an internal diisturbing voice that projects from them-I assume could as easily occupy and be targeted on a cattle car and treated as violently as rubbush though men of great honor.
That our lesson and test is already failed. Why would a man fire a bullet into a cattle car-my opinion is he either has a very limited biew and perspective of the incident and the entire earth/and or is seeking a quick scotre like at a bar or in a sweepstakes-trying this way doesnt cost anything?
Stick with my thoughts. very intersting
Your poem is awesome .
Love and peace,
Susan
Jack