Sensitive?
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Friday, March 28, 2003
Perhaps I was born overly sensitive,
I was delivered in ’59,
and the Wars that were fought behind me,
seemed so starkly
cut and dried.
Perhaps I stayed naively sensitive,
I belong to a Generation Void,
and the crimes that once were around me,
were so overly
simplified.
Perhaps I became coldly insensitive,
I am now connected, and worldly-wise,
and the deeds that I see surrounding me,
seem so selfishly
over-contrived.
Perhaps I am once again sensitive,
I have children, and see my coming demise,
while the world is smaller with unreason,
making Life’s path
less a paradise.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/27/03
WILLIAM
Excellent write to you my friend!!
~E
Chrissie
Allen
There was nothing cut and dried about ww2, or Korea. The locales were just different. A fine write with a younger perception.
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tony
the references to history the play with words
the style
very good