Coffee's Steam
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, May 10, 2003
Coffee’s gentle steam rises
to greet the slumping collapse
of night’s relaxing stance,
as she awaits this new day’s
dawning possibilities,
or torturous length.
Life yet stays its weighty light,
as ethereal breezes swirl
into her incorporeal gaze,
and she becomes…
…the lilting freshness of
glad mockingbirds
crazily paced multi-song…
…the awakening hues of
shapely floral diversity
adorning their morning masks…
…the low-toned twang of
grassy green scents
released into wisps of aroma…
…the shafting glimmers of
fiery cosmic energy
arrowing and diverging…
…the quiver-pulse of
Time’s passing indifference
as it thrums and vibrates…
…the embodiment of
particles eternal streaming,
standing upon a destiny…
...and she unbecomes,
back to corporeal haze,
as morning breezes whirl,
bringing light’s continuing Life.
Torturous length or
dawning possibilities...
she has become the day,
assuming her earthy form,
to greet the essence of being
in coffee’s collapsing steam.
Erin Moen
5/10/03
Copyright 2003 ©
and agree w/Connie...
"Torturous length or
dawning possibilities"...
those two lines...omg!!!!
and the whole, so ...simply wonderfully done in it's images of the ups/downs and
ohhh, I, almsot mystical yet so real...
who knew Coffee's Steam could be this extraordinary...bravos and LOVE
WHAT A PIECE!
(((Erin)))
me
dawning possibilities"...
so much said in just those two lines alone!
Great piece, Erin!
Super Imagery here...I smell the coffee now I gots to run downstairs and get me some!;O)
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
tony
Excellent,
Reindeer
I'm with Tinka
on this one...
Except I like
min with sweet-n-low and coffeemate..lol
Great write
Trixie :)
this is beautiful channeling here!!!You are a conduit for the divine..
Love, Dove
Wait let me take a sip......hmmmmm....nice!!
Love
Tinka