Life's Fragility
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tuesday, May 13, 2003
Life's fragility
death's finality
Man's ability
to create countries
wonderful bounties
but, not the whole world's
causes suffering
and moral buffering
which hardens conscience
with modern science
and causes problems
when sharing this world
as freedom unfurled
the towers crashed down
and we all felt drowned
in hopeless anger
there shined a bright light
events did ignite
compassion's meaning
no more demeaning
differences seen
because of cultures
no more of vultures
our souls to feed on
let's start a new dawn.
Erin Moen
9/4/02
Copyright 2002/2003 ©
AN EXCELLENT WRITE
WILLIAM
Jack
You bring pride to AZ.
tony
no more demeaning
differences seen
because of cultures
no more of vultures
our souls to feed on
let's start a new dawn.
beautiful!
Reindeer
oh, erin...this is such
an emotional, but good,
write...especially
because of cultures
no more vultures
our souls to feed on
let's start a new dawn
AMEN, sweetie...AMEN...
and let it begin with me
i will always remember...
and never forget...
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :(
compassion's meaning
no more demeaning
differences seen
because of cultures
no more of vultures
our souls to feed on
let's start a new dawn.
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
in hopeless anger
there shined a bright light
events did ignite
compassion's meaning..."
Love those lines....bravo, fine work.