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Monday, May 19, 2003

My Right to be a mentress of the Moon;

seems to be,
unlovingly
stuck to me,
unbecoming to me,
so I appear,
an imaged loon.

My Right to be a mentor of the Moon;

comes to mean,
unbelievably,
the luck of me,
discerning the key,
so I appear,
a lucky boon.

My Right to be a student of the Moon;

thrills the me,
unconditionally,
I live the We,
learning my Me,
so I appear,
in my Silvery Moon.

Erin Moen
5/20/03
Copyright 2003 �

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Reviewed by Angelica Young (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

This was very very good!! :)

Love Angie

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

This was so lovely, very beautiful verses here,

I loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

a very lovely poem... i enjoyed reading!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Nice and sweet poetry!!

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Wonderful imagery, Erin..

Love, Dove

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Great write.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Very clever and so unique, you so often do the most imaginative writes.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Beautifully done Erin.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Excellent!!!!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Erin,
"My Right to be a student of the Moon;

thrills the me,
unconditionally,
I live the We,
learning my Me,
so I appear,
in my Silvery Moon. "
unique and creative I
love your exploration of verses.
Peggy

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Cool you

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Hi Erin, Nice and sweet poetry.

tony

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Wow! Erin..This is like a 'word punctuation' poem..I could feel my whole face getting involved.. it's not only thought-provoking, but the quick rhymes/rhythm let my head dance along.. Oh, I loved this. It's 'other-worldly' and a wonderful adventure in words and thoughts.. oooo.. depth AND wonder here.. Great! love, katy. (I will return to this one from time to time for the sheer joy of reading it.. and expect I'll take something new with me each time.. this is so imaginative and inspiring!)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Beautiful moon poem! Great write. Do check out Eileen's Photo; its priceless!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Erin, well written.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 19, 2003

Creative and lovely Erin~ I think you need to see my haloed moon post, the photo is awesome!

Reviewed by Debra Brown (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2003

Not a loon! You are the epitome of poetic grace. Shine your gentle light my poet friend. *smiles* Debbie