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Unplanned Lesson

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, May 22, 2003

Framed in the rear view mirror,
a child dropped at school pauses, gazing at
something, on the edge of the curb,
she stops another, and points it out.
Bus-unloaded children quickly
create a sketchy huddle.
Looping back into the cycle,
getting a better look, it clarifies,
black and tan and legged,
a baby, though larger than
a half dollar. Furred and placid.
Excitement and squeals produce
no notice or movement,
except in childish reactions.
Vice Principal arrives.
Gently his hand reaches,
children leap back, screaming,
as the young tarantula
steps onto its newfound haven,
and is transported, elsewhere,
teaching a lesson.

Erin Moen
5/22/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
"...a sketchy huddle..." <--- that is a hugely imaginative line.. I saw it instantly. You are a master at "showing" us as well as telling us what you create. No wonder I linger when I read you.. I fill up with your story.. then I ponder. So cool! katy.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Interesting and Creative Write Erica...I love spiders and sankes...HA not the average female I suppose BUT all even spiders and snakes can teach us lessons and are a valued part (Spokes persay) in the wheel of life!
GREAT WORK!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Could feel the excitement!!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
We don't see those here in colorado or at least I never have. A good lesson!

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Scary lesson, pretty lady. A fine poem.

Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Could feel the excitement, great write.

Reviewed on May 23, 2003
great write, but i still hate spiders. i am with paul berube and trish mcqueen on that one! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your (spider-hating) friend in texas, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Erin,
I once read that you should never kill a spider, they are a powerful talisman in warding off evil. Your work is always unique and very creative!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Fantastic.. Had me going to the end!!! You are so creative!!!

Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Fantastic lesson, and I am with Paul on the dislike of spiders thing ;-) ~Trish~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Erin, very exciting write. I still hate spiders.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
a lesson taught well!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Why I could never live in the states...

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Dear Erin, Some believe a spider is mans best friend. Great write as always!


tony

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
One of my best friends is a etomologist and he introduced me to Tarantulas as well as ten syllable words. Spiders are incredible cohabitants of our world and we all share a need. I love this nature poem so rich in visuals and childhood awe.

Peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Yuck....yuck........

Reviewed on May 22, 2003
This was a wonderful lesson to teach, just loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Erin,
"Gently he reaches, children leap back,
screaming, as the young tarantula
steps onto his newfound haven,
and is transported, elsewhere,
teaching a lesson. "
OH excellent write.
Peg

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
Hate those things, though many love them for pets;-)whimsical write Erin;-)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
lesson learned


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