A Suicide
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, May 31, 2003
She presses against the pain of her memories,
and flays any happiness she finds,
in her need to obliterate her grieving
of human abandonment.
Light fails, dark beckons, as she proceeds to cut
and bleed, unseen by caring eyes,
she excises and embalms
in human abandonment.
Dawn arrives, rivulet’s of extraneous thoughts
leak through her lax fingers,
as she shadows, and dies,
from human abandonment.
Erin Moen
5/31/03
Copyright 2003 ©
Kind of a strange one... :)
Powerful writing!
CarolHawks
Julie
A truly moving write Erin....Good to read your fantastic words once more.....Ty, love, Dani ;)
Some just gotta do it..
Sadly they do.....
Reindeer
I agree with Eileen. You have spoken for many with this. It is powerfully expressed, and the emotions very vivid! Excellent work!
Hugs,
Maria
Love
Tinka
Leland
Trixie :)
THIS IS A SAD POEM,WITH POWERFUL IMAGERY
EXCELLENT WRITE
WELL PRESENTED
WILLIAM