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Broken Hearts

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, June 5, 2003

The mother brings the baby’s tiny dress
to the mortician, walking and breathing in shock,
and agony, as the child’s heart was broken,
and unfixable, so is hers.

The father hides the baby’s tiny shoes,
and stays at home, unable to handle the death,
and agony, as the child’s heart stopped,
and never restarted, so did his.

She views the album of caskets,
shakily turning the pages,
unbelieving.

He views the video of his daughter,
smiling as he’s crying,
unbelieving.

They bury their infant, together,
and are dying…
from broken hearts.

Erin Moen
5/5/03
Copyright 2003 ©

This is not personal, it's from a TV program, but the pain was so palpable as I watched and I wanted to capture the essence of the feel of losing a child.


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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2003
I know the show and cannot watch it. I lived it. Great write.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2003
Im sitting in the library reading this.. my "lid" is barely on .. I stay far away from this sort of show, book, etc. I do, however, make a "b-line" for your words.. between this one and the recent suicide one, I'm about collapsed altogether.. My god, but this does not allow the reader to remain outside it.. you are a genius at involving us.. and a beautiful soul for understanding that. Remind me never to watch one of these WITH you! Jaysus, Erin, we'd be crying for a month! You know how I love the way you write.. for me, sometimes, it's simply like thinking. sigh.. katy.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 6, 2003
a very painful write
excellently presented

William

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2003
Pain so very deep in this write. My parents buried two babies. The mortician was a woman and she later told my mother that she wept the whole time she was preparing the babies' bodies. This is powerful.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 6, 2003
Erin,
You captured this pain beyond pain,perfectly.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
I can't imagine losing one of my kids.
Very Sad! Glad it's not personal.

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
I watch this show everyday, you covered this so tenderly.

Nancy

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
Dear Erin, You certainly did. This was sad, but yet so lovely!!


tony

Reviewed on June 5, 2003
This was so painful to read..you have captured this terrible loss so well,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
You certainly did capture it Erin, an excellent write on a morbid and heart-rending topic, where a child is involved.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2003

OMG! THIS is cold! OUCH! CHILL! Think I have frostbite!

Thanks,

Teresa

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
Erin, you capture so well something we hope we'll never experience. Thanks.
Leland

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
Mom, very touching, makes me want to cry. :{

KAYLA

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
Oh!! God this one knocked me over........know the feeling....lost a child myself!!

Sorry for your pain!!

Tears...!!
Love
Tinka

Reviewed on June 5, 2003
This is heartbreaking, Erin. Very well writeen. <sniff, sniff> ~Trish~

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2003
Truly a heartbreaking write.

~Joseph

Reviewed on June 5, 2003
Beautifully done!

"Broken Hearts" makes one's heart cries, but inspires and teaches.

Praised be the Author of "Broken Hearts".

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I have enjoyed a lovely true poem. "Broken Hearts" builds souls.


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