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Irrational Fear

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, June 13, 2003

Sheltered,
skeltered,
safely tucked away,
in Copper’s open-pit heart,
mine-owned decrepit town,
she changes, it’s crazy,
the world is much too rough.

Maintained,
mountained,
fenced and lonely days,
tinily distant, so many miles,
desert-ed lands, it’s crazy,
the world is much too tough.

Delusion,
seclusion,
violence outside holds sway,
kids are growing, copper paying,
she’s a hermit, she's crazy,
to her, her world’s enough.

*Companion Piece*

Dripping life in patterns of pain
upon her children’s upturned faces,
the woman gathers her tattered dreams,
and buries her being.


Erin Moen
6/13/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Oh god, Erin.. the second one collapsed me.. 'close to home' as they say.. I'm catching my breath and attempting words that fall flat as I type them.. The way you play with words in the first one: "maintained..mountained".. "tinily" <-- I love that one a ton! on and on.. Reading is only one of the things I do here with you.. you show AND tell! and I SEE and Hear.. now pass that box of tissues, would you please? Moved? ACROSS THE ROOM 'moved'.. yeah! funny, when I finish with your beautys, I don't so much 'finish'.. more like 'recover'.. You're a miracle, you are. love, katy.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Powerful, outstanding...I can't find the right superlatives to praise your writing, Erin:)
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
This is the kind of good writing that I have come to expect when I visit you.

Reviewed on June 14, 2003
An excellent write...sad, but dreams can always begin anew ;)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Wonderfully Written,Erin!!


tony

Reviewed by Dee C.
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Amazing write.....bravo!
Dee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Powerful and touching!!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Profound write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Written masterfully great creation

Reviewed by Patrick Talty
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
You have taken a theme related to *the unintended consequences of shattered dream born of selfishness* and turned it into a poem of unremitting beauty and evocation! I went all the way with it and sank back into reflection and a certain degree of personal regret "recollected in tranquility". Powerful and touching!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Very sad. Great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
stark images Erin,fear can be turned to power when we use it to overcome Excellent write, hopefully the dreams are just delayed not buried;-)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Stark poem. Well done. Too many people bury their dreams. Sad.


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