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Enemied Within

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, June 14, 2003

Whispering sibilance begins early,
crib barred,
shadows dancing,
no, no, no…
see baby scarred.

Jerkiness of childhood prancing,
fenced yard,
sunshine shafting,
"do you see…
how you are?"

Mirrored image mocks cold feelings,
teenage prison,
smallness grafting,
suddenly…
you are there.

Time warp weeping, certain lacking,
unknown idiom,
creeping nastily,
then you know…
life’s almost gone.

Present passing, future balking,
ambition silent,
message cleaving,
just like that…
you are done.

Erin Moen
5/14/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
Breathes there a poet who does not long to lasso life and jot it down.. ? Noone spins words and versions of things as you do. Erin.. you have the heart of a poet.. the truths of a sage.. the cleverness and bravery of a wizard.. you tell it and I embrace the recognition.. love, katy

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2003
". . . teenage prison." I had almost forgot.Thank you.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Greatly crafted

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Deep and evocative. But Erin, in regard to the last verse, I hope you are writing from someone else's point of view. Otherwise, I worry about self-fulfilling prophesy. Let's milk every ounce of joy we can...
b e c a u s e life is short and
brutal~?? Hugs & Kudos, Phyllis

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Well done Erin.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Brilliant, Erin.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Breathtaking.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Wonderfully written...So true....thanks for this!!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
So true.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
excellent imaging and voicing...

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 15, 2003
Erin...This is what I call a great write...thank u...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Thanks for posting this...

Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Wow..I liked this..different...made me think a bit,

Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Hi Erin, Wonderfully written!

tony

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Great Write.

Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Life be's like that, huh! Thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed on June 14, 2003
That quick "you are done." I like this but I'm trying real hard not to be done.GEM

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
Erin, You have a way with words always so awesome.
"Mirrored image mocks cold feelings,
teenage prison,
smallness grafting,
suddenly…
you are there. "
Peggy


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