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I Saw Some People Hurt Today

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, June 19, 2003

I saw some people hurt, today,
friends of mine, Internet chums,
whom I’ve grown to love.

They’ve proffered their
spirits and hearts,
words and thoughts,
understanding and attitude,
to enrich others lives.
One was attacked directly,
slammed and degraded
by vacuous, selfish garbage
of belittled minds.
The other, insidiously,
distressed by doubts of self
brought on by words,
from deceptive fingers,
of clever acrimony,
disguised as Poetry.
The end results
of wounding pain
are equal.

I saw some people hurt, today,
and the world is smaller for it.

Erin Moen
6/19/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
True Erin, evil dwindles the world; I really hope we can all learn mor grace and generosity. There is always something positive about the most insignificant endeavours. Healthy criticism is one that points the positive 'ignoring' the less-so. And the message will always be understood without pain or hurt.
You made a good point.
Nevine

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2003
Yeah life's a Bitch sometimes Erin
:( ....Your poem is great..very moving and true....ty, Dani

Reviewed on June 20, 2003
(((erin)))

all we want to do is share our Gifts with others...

"i saw some people hurt today,
and the world is smaller for it"

i've been attacked in the past, so has my twin sister, so have many of my friends...but i will not allow their narrowmindedness disuade me from writing...i live to write, i love to write, and i MUST write

((((((i'm sorry)))))) *tears*

beautiful, heartbreaking poem

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Good of you to share it Erin, I missed whatever it was, but you know I've had my share;-)It is always detrimental to all when one is hurt, for we are all one.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
A soul that hurts another is a soul that is in deep trouble. Great write.

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Hello, Erin. I hope you were not truly hurt. If so I hope time will take away the pain. Yesterday, a very dear friend of mine was badly hurt by a man she met over the internet. I can only be there for her as a friend and hope she can live with this pain. Here's hoping the world doesn't get much smaller.

Reviewed on June 20, 2003
people who purposely attack others for their glory aren't worth the ground people walk on..they are lower than dirt! heartbreaking write! :( (((HUGS)))

Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Erin, to hurt someone always makes the world smaller....thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Missed it again....but better off for having done so.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
Tell it like it is, small minds and hearts alway attack what they can't understand.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
we must have mutual respect for each other...

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
It is really sad when people choose to be mean or unkind , rather than treating everyone with respect...very well written!

Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Such powerful verses here, I hear you so well in my heart,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Yes Erin I am one of those Who got hurt.....once to often!!
By cheating and double crossing!!
I just can't take it any longer!!

Take care!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
Indeed. Well done, Erin.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 19, 2003
oh Erin very sad write...but very very realistic my friend...cheerrs.....BHUWAN


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