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Facts versus Feelings

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, June 22, 2003

The mystery of being human,
intelligence combined with empathy,
application verses sensation,
truth separated by imagination,
belies the strictures of comprehension.

Feelings are stronger than knowledge.

The woman knows the facts, has seen
the consequences of loving an abuser,
she doesn’t understand
how she stays, her minds says go,
but, no, she is tightly tied to the inaneness,
she wonders why she is ruled
by her feelings.

The man explodes in rage, has seen
the damages he can inflict, and
he likes it, not understanding
how he came to this,
he feels ashamed, yet,
the sensations, overwhelm
his rational self.

Feelings are stronger than knowledge.

She’s always had potential, has seen
her dreams come alive, in her head,
she knows it could come to be,
but, she would rather glide
through Life, she feels divided,
half-emptied, effectively cut
from her reality brain, shadowed,
by lost enthusiasm.

He sacrifices his life to work,
supporting his family comes first, in his mind,
heart is stressed, deep grooves in his face,
he knows he has to cut back,
he aches to let his guard down,
his need to push harder is irrational,
but he cannot stop being a slave
to his ardency.

Feelings are stronger than knowledge.

Another woman-turned-mother cries,
she loves her children, knows
they need to be raised with pride,
it’s in all the books, hard research
into elusive psyche despises
a need to lash out with cutting words,
but, she can’t control the pain
of losing her self.

The man is complacently married,
has tried to keep devout passion true ,
knows his wife is worth fidelity,
but, he sees her through jaded eyes,
softly loving, he only comes alive
with heated emotion,
as he contemplates cheating
on his Life.

Feelings are stronger than knowledge.

The miracle of being human,
sensitivity combined with appreciation,
compassion verses comparison,
proposition separated by conscience,
belies the boundary of awareness.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 6/22/03

Not personal, just a concept of how much we follow our feelings compared to what we have learned and "know". :)
 


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Reviewed on June 24, 2003
This was just outstanding, love your poetry so much,


Reindeer

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Erin your writing is amazing.....Are you published??? You damn well should be....this is truly one of the most moving, real writes I've read in a long time....ty, Dani

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
This is one of the best things I have ever read. Outstanding. Touched my heart - and put me a mirror in front of my eyes.
Very well done.
S.

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
Outstanding job...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
What a powerful write!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
Excellent write...very very thought provoking write...thank u....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Common sense is not a strong suit in the human condition. Work at a women't shelter sometime and the truth is startling. Good poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Excellent Erin! Yes, we are ruled by emotions rather than knowledge, having always been told to follow our hearts and our impulses, which is a big mistake, many find out too late!There must be a balance! See you provoked me to give my 2 cents worth, with your interesting premise;-)!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Good write Erin!
Jack

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Highly powerful and thought provoking...

Love,
Dove

Reviewed on June 22, 2003
brilliant write, erin; well done, sweetie! (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
((((Erin))))
A FLAWLESS VICTORY OF A WRITE!!!! My but you are a wise young soul!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Your intelligent, acute and sensitive perceptions are truly outstanding, Erin.This is brilliant.
Love
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Erin, I wish you could talk to my friend. She loves this guy who keeps on hurting her (emotionally, so far, thank God). She can't understand why she can't let him go. She feels a deep resonation with him, but he cannot commit even though he says he loves her, too. It's almost like she's let herself be hooked on his line, but he refuses to reel her in. Until he makes up his mind she's going to be rolling around in the water. It drives me crazy that she puts herself through this.

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
"You can never know everything, and part of what you know is always wrong. Perhaps even the most important part. A portion of wisdom lies in knowing that. A portion of courage lies in going on anyways."

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Hi Erin, Wow, tremendious insight here! Great piece of writing. What I appreciate and laud is, you wrote this as a two way street. You represented men very well!!


tony:)

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
:) Silly, not in the way you think, but, of course, "I" am in there, what I experience and observe come out in my writing. Didn't mean it to seem like a couple, more like pairs of similar situations. It may sound desolate because I pictured the "wrong" side of reacting to feelings instead of knowledge, which I'm sure we've all felt, it's part of being depressed, when feelings overwhelm any iota of sense, which can last hours, days, or, saddly, years... Didn't mean to ruffle you up, KatyKat! ;)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Wow!!!
Amazingly good!!
Erin how did I you know how I feel..
This is a perfect "Image" I see myself in it!! Are you a mind reader???

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Erin, there's nearly a feeling of something 'subliminal' here.. I'm absolutely amazed at how fully you developed both of these people.. compassion/loathing/understanding on both sides yet no real judgement made by 'the poet'..the observer.. you left that for the reader.. there is utter desolation in every single word here, your objective, no doubt.. you have achieved a spectacular masterpiece of thought and feeling.. You, madam, are that "next level up" .. a poet's poet! Jaysus, PLEASE tell me this is NOT about you! I now, reluctantly, turn and go.. but this will resonate for some time. love, katy.

Reviewed on June 22, 2003
A nice thought-provoking piece, Erin. Well-done!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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