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The Phantom Comes

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, June 25, 2003

As the darkness starts it’s creeping,
sentinels begin their weeping,
echoes sound their “ever-keeping,”
black miasma does its seeping.

Seeing madness,
manic sadness,
inner badness,
compass gone.
Poison staring,
mind despairing,
dogma sharing,
phantom comes.

As the darkness drips it’s bleeding,
memories begin inbreeding,
echoes sound their “ever-pleading,”
black miasma does its seeding.

Feeling error,
coffin bearer,
spinning terror,
vision wrong.
Spirit reaming,
passion gleaning,
maliced meaning,
phantom comes.

As the darkness shows it’s greeting,
anguished thoughts begin their eating,
echoes sound their “ever-beating,”
black miasma has its seating.

Sensing shadows,
hanging gallows,
empty hollows,
mirthless song.
Painful lading,
soulless trading,
heartless blading,
phantom comes.

Erin Moen
6/25/03
Copyright 2003 ©

Inspired by a phrase I thought of earlier today, "the phantom in my mind." :)


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Reviewed on December 22, 2006
Erin, I love the building intensity, the emotion engulfing my thoughts and stretching my imagination. Wonderfully written, you are a most amazing writer. Thank you for sharing this on AD...
Linda

Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
God, this, yes...
that phantom...in one's mind, I, well...
This was powerful, very, for me, to me...such extraordinary verses of the dread...
Oh, damn, it got to me and still, there is this brilliance with words, and it worked all too, too well!
(((you)))
Awed...
stunned, as this was a stunning piece, Bravo!

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
We are undoubtily our own worst Phantoms.. Well penned.. What i got to fight one off be right back..Wow..I have more then most, lol..Thank you! michael

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
I totally agree with Amor.
Best wishes always
from
kay

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
excellent poetic precursor to the phamtom's arrival...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Outstanding work, Erin. Excellent in composition and style in every line.
Amor

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
ooooo, Erin.. I love this stuff! Yes, Yes.. it's quite brilliant in context.. oh, but I love the flawless rhythm and rhyme.. head's a-bobbin', feet a-tappin', and my brain is just hollering about how damned GREAT your imagination is.. oooo, I just love this! katy.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Whoa! Erin, this one has me shaking and spinning! Brilliant poem, wonderfully worded! Great flow! Dark! I don't wanna meet this phantom!

Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Erin, this was absolutely excellent. A pleasure to read :-)

Reviewed on June 26, 2003
This was excellent, I enjoyed it so very much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Erin,
Isn't it great when one verse can lead to a whole poem! That is how it happens for me sometimes also! Really enjoyed this...and I can so relate! "mirthless song" That line is great! You capture the inner turmoil so well!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
GM, Erin
Great Write As Always!
Maybe someday our phantoms will meet.


tony:)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
I don't mind Phantom........but the he must sing tha o"para......lol!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
SPlendid write...superb!!!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Wow, Erin! Beautiful. But does the phantom have a light side?
Write on!
Leland

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Outstanding Erin!It seems many of us are hosting a phantom of late. methinks it a sign of the times;-)I'm even talking to mine,and expecting an answer!LOL funny(not)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003
This is an outstanding composition in Free Verse. The rhythm flows to meet the

cadence of the emotions, and the pictures keep the imagination under the beats of

the verses made out with words that only masters can poetize within the frame of

wonders synchronizing images and sounds in a vision that creates more dreams in

my minds as "The Phantom Comes", inspiring and teaching in the art of beauty.

I have learned and I have grown by reading “The Phantom Comes”.

I Praise You, Poet Erin Moen.

Never rest Your pen; don’t let Your quills dry.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Thank God it is only in our heads.


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