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Subjectivity: A Thank you....

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, July 5, 2003

She shivers with anticipation,
tonight, she wants to write.
She’s been thinking, has been reminded,
how subjectivity is relative
when it is viewed objectively.
A truism already known in her depths.
She accepts its premise, now,
with personal cognizance,
beams with escalating gratitude
of friendly reiterations of her poetic soul.
She broods on cycles, on creative outlets,
of Man’s need to self-proclaim
and expound individual realities.
As it should be, in the wonder of Being.
She marvels at compassion’s strength,
its selfless, sensitive grace, its purity of form,
and its effects on human lives.
And, she smiles, as she resumes inhaling
words multitude meanings,
breathing quickly, accruing awareness.
She allows her fingers to compose,
explaining her minds heartbeat,
communicating her thanks,
and freeing her Spirit.

Erin Moen
7/5/03
Copyright 2003 ©

Thank you, my friends, for your compassion. :)


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Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2003
of Man’s need to self-proclaim,
and expound individual realities.

THE CAESURA COMES HERE!

As it should be, in the wonder of Being.
She marvels at compassion’s strength,
its selfless, sensitive grace, its purity of form,

This poem really hits home emotionally and in its heart-felt empathy for humankind, not as a generic blob, but as individuals struggling to live and to LOVE...

.... to reach beyond the selfish I (eye)

Richard





Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on July 7, 2003
Lovely, Erin:)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2003
Let me add my name to this growing list of admirers. Your prose wass just magnificant and each thought was a jewel. I like you I think.

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Never before has a greater Thank You been express so sweetly. It is us who should be thanking you for sharing your talents with us.

Hugs,
The Voice

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
You dear Lady are a fine poet and your ideas are deep and well thought out. I envy your words skills and wish to emulate you. But it is hard to be another beside yourself, isn't it. Great work Erin. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
{{{Erin}}}
This piece just like all your others is a real pleasure to read! Excellant Work! You will always have my compassion and understanding!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Enjoyed this so much, wonderful write.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Excellent write, Erin. Even the anticipation of writing gets the creative juices flowing. Well said and done.
Leland

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
A fantastic, thoughtful piece, Erin. you're writing is always outstanding.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
ERIN.. MOST EXCELLENT..

And, she smiles, as she resumes inhaling
words multitude meanings,
breathing quickly, accruing awareness.
She allows her fingers to compose,
explaining her minds heartbeat,

BRAVO
communicating her thanks,
and freeing her Spirit.



Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Excellent, Erin....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
.."her minds heartbeat..." <--- a phrase of unique, poetic beauty. Erin, this is a feast for the reader.. I devoured it twice.. I couldn't help myself. You've expressed our thoughts.. eloquently and with your usual grace. I love the way you think.. and feel! Superb! love, katy.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
Erin,

This is fresh, pure and honest. Thank You!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
A wonderful write with depth Erin!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed on July 6, 2003
“Subjectivity: A Thank You…” It bears a deep message.

This poem is from the womb of the soul and delivered by a

Heart that pumps knowledge from the Universe.

“Subjectivity: A Thank You…” was poemized with six hundred and

sixty eight letters in one hundred and twenty five words into one

STANZA POEM with twenty-four lines that tells us the humanity of

the soul and the divinity of the heart.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
your spirit soars! excellent poem!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
This is wonderful write with depth....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
{{{Erin}}}
this is so wonderfuly writen..! I have made a decision to leave AD for good starting with my membership over with at midnight...I thank you so very, very much for all your beautiful healing words you placed upon my spirit when I needed it..You are a rare flower so glorious an speacial..If you want to stay in touch contact me through doves healing world .com

Love you,
Dove

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
Love it.....

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
Thank YOU Erin.

You poetry is always so lush with depth and unique thought...Gotta love ya!

Dani

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
Beautiful! You express yourself in style!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
Beautifully expressed in your unique and lovely style!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
Fantastic write!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
Very nice Erin!!

Jack

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
Erin,
Thank you for your poetry, compassion and friendship.
"And, she smiles, as she resumes inhaling
words multitude meanings,
breathing quickly, accruing awareness.
She allows her fingers to compose
and explain her minds heartbeat,
communicating her thanks,
and freeing her Soul. "
excellent piece.
Peg


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