Subjectivity: A Thank you....
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, July 5, 2003
She shivers with anticipation,
tonight, she wants to write.
She’s been thinking, has been reminded,
how subjectivity is relative
when it is viewed objectively.
A truism already known in her depths.
She accepts its premise, now,
with personal cognizance,
beams with escalating gratitude
of friendly reiterations of her poetic soul.
She broods on cycles, on creative outlets,
of Man’s need to self-proclaim
and expound individual realities.
As it should be, in the wonder of Being.
She marvels at compassion’s strength,
its selfless, sensitive grace, its purity of form,
and its effects on human lives.
And, she smiles, as she resumes inhaling
words multitude meanings,
breathing quickly, accruing awareness.
She allows her fingers to compose,
explaining her minds heartbeat,
communicating her thanks,
and freeing her Spirit.
Erin Moen
7/5/03
Copyright 2003 ©
Thank you, my friends, for your compassion. :)
and expound individual realities.
THE CAESURA COMES HERE!
As it should be, in the wonder of Being.
She marvels at compassion’s strength,
its selfless, sensitive grace, its purity of form,
This poem really hits home emotionally and in its heart-felt empathy for humankind, not as a generic blob, but as individuals struggling to live and to LOVE...
.... to reach beyond the selfish I (eye)
Richard
Hugs,
The Voice
This piece just like all your others is a real pleasure to read! Excellant Work! You will always have my compassion and understanding!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Leland
~Chrissie
And, she smiles, as she resumes inhaling
words multitude meanings,
breathing quickly, accruing awareness.
She allows her fingers to compose,
explaining her minds heartbeat,
BRAVO
communicating her thanks,
and freeing her Spirit.
In Spirit,
Bear
This is fresh, pure and honest. Thank You!
~Joseph
Love
Tinka
This poem is from the womb of the soul and delivered by a
Heart that pumps knowledge from the Universe.
“Subjectivity: A Thank You…” was poemized with six hundred and
sixty eight letters in one hundred and twenty five words into one
STANZA POEM with twenty-four lines that tells us the humanity of
the soul and the divinity of the heart.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
this is so wonderfuly writen..! I have made a decision to leave AD for good starting with my membership over with at midnight...I thank you so very, very much for all your beautiful healing words you placed upon my spirit when I needed it..You are a rare flower so glorious an speacial..If you want to stay in touch contact me through doves healing world .com
Love you,
Dove
You poetry is always so lush with depth and unique thought...Gotta love ya!
Dani
Jack
Thank you for your poetry, compassion and friendship.
"And, she smiles, as she resumes inhaling
words multitude meanings,
breathing quickly, accruing awareness.
She allows her fingers to compose
and explain her minds heartbeat,
communicating her thanks,
and freeing her Soul. "
excellent piece.
Peg