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Trivialities

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, August 8, 2003

She used to write a good letter,
she would tell of trivialities, and embellish them,
with wordy descriptions, to make people smile.
She gave up penning letters
when she had her kids.

She used to be funny at parties,
she would tell stories, with embellishments,
of her particular plights, to make people laugh.
She gave up going to parties
when her mind went on the skids.

She used to think she didn't matter,
she lived inner fantasies, and embellished them,
with wordy descriptions, to make people see.
She gave up becoming reality
and drifted as she slid.

She now knows she is important,
she lives humanity and embellishes actions,
of her particular plights, to make people feel.
She gave up worrying about insanities,
and recreated her id.

Erin Moen
8/8/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Ohhhhhhhhh, god, Erin, you are a crafty one, aren't you? Weary from traveling, surrounded by laundry and you pick up a 'pen' and produce perfection, just to remind yourself that we, your eager readers, are clammoring for another eloquent peek into your inner workings.. This is a piece that quietly shouts at me.. and proves once again that you write with every honest fiber that is you. What a poem! love, katy xox. welcome back, me sweet! (smile).

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
This was excellent..I liked this so much, excellent message here..

Reindeer

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
This is excellantly done Erin, message also well taken!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
well penned!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Very Good, Erwin!

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
I'll try this.... sure needed to read this today, Erin! Thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Wow! this is so good! Terrific!

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Excellent write.

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
BRAVO!...My dear. There's a quiet beauty about this piece.
~Jackie~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
what a write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Wonderfully penned, Erin.
Kudos!

tony:)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Wonderful...

Reviewed on August 8, 2003
OOoh...LOVED the flow of this one, Erin! Great message within...Wonderful write!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Hey sweetie what an Idea
.She now knows she is important,
she lives humanity and embellishes actions,
of her particular plights, to make people feel.
She gave up worrying about insanities,
and recreated her id. "
PJ

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
"recreated her id." That can solve a world of problems. Very excellent write, Erin.
Leland

Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Nice!...

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Fantastic write!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2003
Not too shabby of one either.


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