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Tuesday, August 12, 2003

The living body stands,
first person declares,
“I am…an actuality,
guised in individuality,
an essence of private totality
…I am.”

The individual stands,
second person decries,
“You are…possessive,
emotionally much too pensive,
an entity most obsessive
…you are.”

The pensive human stands,
third person decides,
“She is…persistence,
diversified resistance,
I must applaud her existence,
…she is.”

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/12/03

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Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Excellent work, Erin, a mind-teasing treat that works on a far deeper level than it initially would seem...!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Outstanding poem!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 13, 2003

Erin...what a wonderful work you have shared with us today...thanks a lot....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

Oh, I really do like this one, Erin.
~Jackie~

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

Oooo Erin this is SUPERB, such control and mastery of word...LOVE IT!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

Fantastic! A study in human will, human frailties, human examination! I juat pictured these speakers/poet with feet firmly planted, proclamations meant to hear, even if only the speaker is listening.. What a mover and shaker you are! love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

Erin, I do love the play with the words, and they speak volumes!!!! Excellent...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

Thoughtful and powerful write.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

This is excellent and thoughtful, Erin.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

Really something to think about. She is She says! She feels She is! You write You are! ;)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

Well done!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

Great write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

I love the way you played these words, especially the last stanza!Go baby Go!;-)

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

"I think, therefore, I am!"
Excellent write, Erin.
Leland

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

Bravo Erin,
Great write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

good 'un, erin; enjoyed! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

I've seen a lot of men become really possessive with their wives/girlfriends. And some of the women let them ride roughshod over them. But more and more, women are taking no crap. I applaud that. It's about time these stupid men got a taste of thier own medicine. Maybe it will help them grow up.

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