i wondered once...
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Friday, August 15, 2003
i wondered once if i could feel
if I could feel through depths of steel
through depths of steel where i conceal
where i conceal what i can’t reveal
what i can’t reveal what’s so unreal
what’s so unreal i cannot deal
i cannot deal with Man’s Ideal
with Man’s Ideal what seems to heal
what seems to heal is not for real
is not for real is not the deal
is not the deal i must appeal
i must appeal is anything real
I wondered once if I could feel
Erin Moen
8/15/03
Copyright 2003 ©
this wondrous phase
for days and days
to follow your maze
to where your head
has movingly fed
with all you've said
my gaping mind
oh, no I find
the more I read
the more I need.
God, Erin, you always make me smarter and wiser.. your rhyme schemes tickle my pallette, for I read you aloud.. your commentary feeds my thoughts. We are destined for a face to face.. count on it! Love, katy xox.
Love Tinka
You were on a roll Girl!
Terrific!
Bonnie
~Julie :)