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i wondered once...

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, August 15, 2003

i wondered once if i could feel
if I could feel through depths of steel
through depths of steel where i conceal
where i conceal what i can’t reveal
what i can’t reveal what’s so unreal
what’s so unreal i cannot deal
i cannot deal with Man’s Ideal
with Man’s Ideal what seems to heal
what seems to heal is not for real
is not for real is not the deal
is not the deal i must appeal
i must appeal is anything real

I wondered once if I could feel

Erin Moen
8/15/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by Lisa Gibson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
I really liked this! Interesting repetition throughout. Really liked this!!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2003
Is it a craze
this wondrous phase
for days and days
to follow your maze
to where your head
has movingly fed
with all you've said
my gaping mind
oh, no I find
the more I read
the more I need.
God, Erin, you always make me smarter and wiser.. your rhyme schemes tickle my pallette, for I read you aloud.. your commentary feeds my thoughts. We are destined for a face to face.. count on it! Love, katy xox.

Reviewed on August 16, 2003
Nice write and excellent thoughts. I wonderf that myself sometimes.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 15, 2003
Nice dealing write hehehe...enjoyed reading it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on August 15, 2003
Nice momnorhyme. these are quite hard to do. Good job Erin. Lonny

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
Reviewed on August 15, 2003
WOW!!!!!!!!
You were on a roll Girl!
Terrific!

Bonnie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 15, 2003
creative and meaningful, I know the feeling!WEll done Erin!

Reviewed on August 15, 2003
Very interesting poetic scheme here, Erin. I liked it!

~Julie :)


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