choppy, scary and right on the edge! good work!

you are eamrkable, as always, this chills me, it is all too true...I love your work, it, it speaks volumes...pain, yes...and our veins, sensitive to such as the inside/outside...yes, you've captured what life can be... for someone who simply 'sees' all too much
(((erin))))
me...

Sure are agreeable with those venerable viable veneral veins.

Great write. I wrote a similiar poem called Isolated Misery, which not sure whether I like it much, but it seems so true.

Excellent metaphor, but you have to stop agreeing;-)! wonderful sad poem....

Events that happen in today's world have a way of separating us from the pulse that connects us all. How long that separation exists is up to the one affected. This poem made me think sideways for a little bit. Very well done.

I COULD APPLY MARTIAL LAW ON YOU. How can there to say You are alone?>>>Grin < < <

"Venial Veins" is profound and a little sad, but is a reality for most people.

I have learned and enjoyed the reading. "Venial Veins" strikes deep relection of living, and thoughts on existing.

I Salute You, Poet Ein E. Moen.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

You're stretching my brain here Erin. A brilliant piece of writing.
~Chrissie

Agree to disagree!!

Love Tinka

Erin, I could be waaaaay off here but to me this bellows loudly that we all agree to far too many things, often because we are helpless to understand or to change them.. you've cited the very events/parts in life that can so easily distract us from feeling significant, from contributing to our own need to be heard.. that last "I agree" took this home for me. It's a damned fine commentary and a helluva a poem! That is above question! (smile) love, katy xox.

Nice evolution of the various aspects of the world and self. Like the form of this and the repeated "and I agree" at the end--great way to finish. J.

Agree not, I know you.