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Sunday, August 17, 2003

I saw a shallow sea surf by
my place of pain possessed by I.

‘she wallowed in the surfing sea
aware how shallow life could be’

I saw a spiral vortex fall
and lance the pain possessed by all.

‘she swallowed vortex, blood and bone
became aware with quiet moan’

I saw a shining wind looped tight
and wrapped in pain possessed by light

‘she flowed wind-shine into her mind
and knew the pain processed by kind’

Erin Moen
8/17/03
Copyright 2003 ©

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Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

The seems deep but with a bouncing, non-threatening rhythm.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

Your depth is amazing. Leaves a mind wandering off...just floating. Applause!

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

Fine work of art !

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

Erin, you've been very 'inside' yourself of late.. layered, solo-sounding. It's producing some lingering moments. Pain ultimately allows us to recognize and rejoice in the 'pain-free'.. you are an inspiring poet, madam. love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

awesome write, erin! :D (hmmm..that is a perfect description of me...ran out of my pills, and i am "pain possessed"! LOL) (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

Awesome poetry Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

Wicked, wonderful word-weaving, Erin! Very, very interesting and quietly searing. There's more going on with these words than revealed on first read... a sign of good poetry!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

Beautiful poetry, but I sense hurt deep inside, hope all is well....

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

Love the last two verses...
Excellent
PJ

Reviewed by RD Larson

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

extremly touching. visually stunning. Thank you.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

Enjoyed the rhymes and meters. Wonderful write, Erin!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)