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My Daughter Upstaged Me!

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, August 22, 2003

I went to the mailbox today
to see what I would find.
I opened the door, took a peek inside
and there a bundle reclined.

I lifted it out, five envelopes bound,
my 12 yr. old daughter’s name on top.
I hefted it and instantly flashed
to the news from last years school.

She’d had a poem selected, and so was in
the “Anthology of Poetry of Young Americans”
and I had purchased five (of course), for gifts you know,
then with summers fun forgot I had.

Meanwhile…

My poetry site had planned a book,
we worked a few months to set it up.
Due out in July, I was gone for the debut,
got home from vacation, school starting caught me up.

I didn’t order my book,
haven’t seen my name in print,
and as I sit and read my daughters
“Whisper in the Wind”
all I can say is…

I’m so proud of her!

With a wry smile on my lips.

Erin Moen
8/22/03
Copyright 2003 ©

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

She'll be home soon, I can't wait to show her!! :D

My daughter's poem...

Whisper in the Wind

In the shadow of the night,
I hear the whisper of the wind,
So soft, so gentle like a mother
Cradling her baby in the night,
As I sit and listen in the light of the moon,
When I sit and stare while the gentle winds talks to me,
I start to sway as the wind cradles me to sleep,
And as I start to dream I can still hear the
Whisper in the wind.



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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2003
Jaysus, how did I miss this?! All the pains of childbirth, the wee hours of waking, the sassy remarks, the jam on the floor, the cyclone-hit rooms.. erased fully and eternally by this evidence of who our children are.. they think, they feel, they create and flourish as we look on. We have Mother's Day so they can honor us.. how beautifully you have reminded us that we joyfully and eagerly honor them as well. I'm sitting here with a drenched face and deep thoughts of recognition. Magnificent, Erin. She and you are, you know! love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Fabulous and precious Erin, my sincere congrats to you both!
Her poem is absolutely lovely and did deserve to be published!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed on August 23, 2003
"My Daughter Upstaged Me!" The loved creation always does!

Thousands of ovations!

I enjoyed the story and the poems.

HAPPY HEALTHY SATURDAY.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
this is lovely, she is really good.. thank you for sharing

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
what a wonderful write!!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
wonderful... i know the feeling...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Awesomely beautiful Erin...congratulations to you both Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Congratulations to you both. Great story Erin

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Your daughter has amazing talent! A regular chip off the old block. I am most impressed!

~Jackie~

Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Her poem was beautiful! Congratulations!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Super wonderful..Floreann

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Excellent affectionate write.

tony:)

Reviewed by RD Larson
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
What a wonderful expression of love.

Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Congratulations! That is wonderful news!!!! YYYAAAAYYYYYYYYYY! Keep on...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
Wonderful news! Thanks for the sharing.

Reviewed on August 22, 2003
(((erin)))

you have every reason to be proud--she gets her talent from her Mama *that's you*

congratulations to you both

((((HUGS)))) and love,

karla. :)


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