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by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, September 3, 2003

can’t think
can’t get in

i pushed my brain
pulled too hard
i took the strings
wove silken thread
now mind is dead

i can’t get in
can’t think

i pen a thought
muse a line
i walk a maze
the feeling breaks
i lose the pace

can’t get in
can’t think

Erin Moen
9/3/03
Copyright 2003 ©

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Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

You got in, excellent work Erin! YF ~Z~

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Awesome work again Erin, and geez do I ever know exactly what you mean!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2003

Erin..If this isn't recognized by everyone here we have all gone 'brain dead'.. HOWEVER.. said by you, in your way, gives new, almost inviting meaning to the dreaded 'writers block'.. I want the one you've got if it means I'll write like this! (smile) This is truly cool. love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

The thinking will come back. Sometimes we try and think too hard.
Enjoyed! Have a great night.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

You put it so well, see how you think;-)methinks it's catching;-)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Hi Erin...so good to be reading you again...oh been there...done that...great write....floria

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Don't you just hate getting locked out? Clever write.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Afrika Abney

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Wonderful write, keep up the great work. One Love

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Three deep breaths - it'll come...just be patient.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Know the feeling...excellent write.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Do you ever wonder why every one is smiling except you?

Reviewed by anne cunningham

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

all the kings horses, and all the kings men, will someone please put erin's head back together again. :)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

I've been there, everyday in fact. lol
Great write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

hehehe...know the feeling...excellently expressed!!

LOvE tInKa..can't think!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

excellent write....beautifully exprssed!!!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

I've had a few days like that..excellently expressed!

Reindeer

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

Yeah, Erin, I can relate to this in a BIG way! Wonderful poem, put a wry smile on my face!

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this but i can't think right now.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

Hahaha! No kidding? I wonder why? Hehehe, I hope tomorrow, you will be better.

Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

This should be called "Writer's Block"! LOL! Been there, done that! Touche, Erin!

Jules :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

I have had days like that! Great write.

Reviewed by Veronica Hosking

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

I know how you feel, Erin. Of course having 2 kids destroy the room behind you doesn't help. ;D

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