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Can You Fly?

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, September 5, 2003

“Can you fly?”, she breathes.
“Can you fledge your wings
while you burrow into
the softened soil
of umbrage?”

“Can you see?”
“Can you free your sight
while you blur the lines
that opens eyes
to sharpened times?”

“Can you feel?”, she sighs.
“Can you touch your mind
while you refuse to reach
into the breadth
of humanity?”

“Can you fly…?”

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/5/03 


 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
excellent work!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Fantastic write !

Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Great piece of poetry. Excellent.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Wonderful piece!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
This is brilliant, Erin. How could any of us profess to be or to feel free if we ignore what's happening..? YOu've written rhetorically.. and you've made it work to perfection... simple, brief and powerful! What a woman! love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Most excellent poetry Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
A great example of poetry...your lines outline emotion like a chalkline around a body at a crime scene. What doesn't fly...soars.
Amor

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
An invitation to soar with insistent questions drilling for answers. A thought provoking write, Erin.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed on September 5, 2003
OOh, LOVED the third stanza! Excellent!

Jules :)

Reviewed by Marvin Kirsh
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
dear Erin-liked this one. Briefly expressed
with depth. Some time we create viscious/futile repetitive frustration for ourselves and others when we write too much between the lines-no one can exactly stand in anothers shoes and shpild be the point where we draw the line to stop /(if we dont know where(the line betweeeen my shoes and yours)- it is never to venture too far). Others dont know ther lifes values and priorities of applying some effort and intellect to this fact-a fact of wheels and wings for flight. Marvin

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Love this one!!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Wondrous Erin, with you around anyone could fly;-)

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
a very excellent poem

Reviewed on September 5, 2003
I believe I can fly! Sorry Erin, that's a song.....smile... Now, if certain people would stay out of my way, I could soar instead of flapping like a new bird....excellent write, Erin! Brings out such emotion...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Erin, this was Excellent! ~Z~

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Oooh, such ambiguity. Such passion. Can there be both? You carried it off.


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