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Dani's Fainted!

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, September 10, 2003

Dani’s fainted! Poor talented lass!
She’s had such a shock,
here’s how it came to pass…

Trumpets announced the contest from den to den,
AD meant to make its authors happy again.
A cheer went up, some sent beers round,
a purpose!...such prestige, to wear this gold crown!

Vibrant energy sizzled, it hung in the air!
Manic abuse of muses howled from some lairs!
The glow from ids thinking spread over the globe,
pinpointed in variety of countries it showed,

encased in one world, or maybe more.

Poems were dredged and revised,
others captured with cunning,
many were crying and came down in a flood.
Sonnets were singing, rhymers were winging,
a few jumped from the sea, asking for tea!

Several shivered and hid, just little kids,
there were bonfires of love, hells above,
pieces of shadows lurking alone
and feel of a vultures tongue, licking on bone,

wringing from me a tiny-sharp moan.

Binocular visions focused religions,
pains of medical decisions
crashed into harmony, chaos combined,
while angular circles cannibalized time.

Faint echoed whispers, gliding on leaves,
quasars came down, scattering seeds,
hollow touched core, breath met dirt,
spatial length engulfed its worth…

and it continued in a Pan-like frenzy.

Poems were prancing and weeping,
the bug-types were creeping,
a couple were dreading
where mad thoughts were heading
and dove off a cliff, but uncomfortably missed!

Gamblers road in on ponies, eager to bet,
mountains bowed down, east turned to west,
mice chased eagles, stones turned soft...

cease this contest, we’re falling off!

Breathe.

Diversity elbowed each other aside,
egos crowded seductively,
carving statues from sweat and blood,
frozen, as the yellow brick road
bestowed its magical path

to Dani,
Quiller Extraordinaire!

Erin Moen
9/9/03

This poem and related concepts are copyright © Erin Moen 2003, and may not be reproduced in part or in whole without the author's express permission.

*Still needs work* Congratulations, Dani! Winner of AD's first Poetry Contest. A marvelous artist and word crafter. :)


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Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Oh yes indeed she is.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Excuse me! I didn't get one of those beers! Harrumph! (giggle).. One marvelous, talented, beautiful heart celebrating another marvelous, talented, beautiful heart.. sigh.. this is what makes life so damned worth living! This was an adventure.. a bloody BLAST to read, ERin.. You AND Dani have done our den PROUD! YAHOOOOOO! ok.. now where's my beer! love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
This is brilliant Erin!
Dani is a fine poet and so deserving.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by RD Larson
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
What a charge! Well done!

Reviewed on September 10, 2003
QUICK!! get the smelling salts! get some oxygen!! our dani's done fainted!~ LOL

she DESERVED to win; she is a shining talent at the den, and we are all indeed busting with pride over her accomplishment!

GOOD for her!

maybe you'll strike gold next time...who KNOWS who will win next???? the suspense builds....

(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed on September 10, 2003
(((erin)))

hee hee--she deserves the honor

*congrats, dani*

erin, maybe you'll be next :) hope so--love your writes, even though i don't always review them, i always read them

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
You're in fine form, Erin!
A thoroughly tickling, inspired tribute.

Dani indeed deserves it.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
So cute, she is very deserving, great poem

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Hope she didn't hit her head on the way down! I read her poem and she deserved to win. And what's this about "still needs work"? You're quite the accomplished wordsmith yourself!

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Way to go, Erin! This is hilarious and oh-so-clever!

Reviewed by Lorrieann Russell (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
YEAH! :) Well done! Both you and Dani!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
I dub this the write of 2003~ Spectacular Erin! I told Dani she would win;-)Congrats to her (again;-) and to your wonderful brain that concocted this magic!

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
wonderful!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Excellent tribute Erin!!

Tell Dni she promised to share the money...lol!!

Congtratz DANI!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Wonderful tribute to Dani :-) and the contest.

Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Super poem Erin...and my congrats to Dani as well. LOL.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
LOL!! I did just about.

Loved this Erin..You've got it all going on in this poem....you capture the animation of the comp so well.....thank you, Dani

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Yeah I am with Paggy...dani is a very very fine poetess....excellent tribute ERIN!!!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Excellent Tribute write Erin...
It is wonderful news...
A fine Poetess she is.
And this is wonderful of you.


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