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If I Should Die Before I Wake

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, September 10, 2003

I am afraid to sleep tonight.
(now i lay me down to weep)
I am afraid of darkest blight.
(i pray the Lord my soul to keep)
I feel the hate of manic zeal.
(if i should die before i wake)
I hate to know that it is real.
(i pray the Lord my soul to take)

I want to see the world tomorrow.
(now i lay me down to hope)
I want to see my children grow.
(i pray to God that i can cope)
I am afraid of falling planes.
(i want to live in yesterday)
I am afraid of frenzied reigns.
(i want to put my fears away)

I ache to know my family’s safe.
(now i lay my heart down deep)
I feel someday we’ll find relief.
(i pray the Lord my soul to keep)
I crave a sign of human trust.
(if i should live till morning’s light)
Killing innocence is so unjust.
(i pray to God we clear our sight)

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
9/10/03 Copyright ©
 



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Reviewed on September 14, 2008
Erin, I rarely comment on poetry (since I suck at it..lol), but this one is so special, so poignant, and so very GOOD! It broke my heart, made me feel, and your words made it real.

Well done!

Julie

Reviewed on July 29, 2008
Intense - powerful - beautiful poetry, Erin. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Very creative and appealing message.
Well done!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
Oh Erin this is most touching....so so heartfelt...great write...floria

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
Erin this is a most touching and well written poem...Really, really well done!!!

Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
Erin, profound and endearing. Thank you for sharing. Lisa

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
Erin, what a great and powerful write! You always say what alot of us can only feel...more please! ED

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
Oh my! This really touches the heart.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
Very profound write!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
My god, Erin.. in the midst of brilliant form, rhyme, meter, you clutch the eye, the mind, the heart of this reader. When you write you omit nothing! You truly understand the collective agony of this country's deepest fears.. and write them with unbending tenderness. I'm in your debt for having read this. love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
Original. Well done. Profound. Clap, clap.

Reviewed on September 11, 2003
Excellent, powerful write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
Powerful heartbreaking write Erin!!

love tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
kije the interplay of original and established verse... well done!

Reviewed on September 10, 2003
This was a powerful heartbreaking poem, keep up the great work!
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Ahhh Erin! A voice that speaks for us all! Intense,breathtaking poetry! I think we are all holding our breath this night...


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