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The Godgame

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, September 20, 2003

The godgame,
the all form,
awareness epiphanies counter-weight,
past, future, present,
allotted, preordained in length.

The godgame,
the art form,
strikes awareness’s by-product fate,
future passes the present,
allocated, foreordained in strength.

The godgame,
the end form,
awareness, accepted, eternal weight,
present the past to the future,
absolved, subtleties, a waste.

Erin Moen
9/19/03
© Copyright 2003

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Perhaps I should add I am two pages away from finishing John Fowles "The Magus", the inspiration for this piece. Intriguing book, intriguing style of writing, I have been reading it for two months! Ten to 20 pages a night, my only time left for entertainment reading, two pages to the ending... It is here, beside me as I type, but I will wait to finish it in the manner it was started, late at night, lying in bed. :)



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Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
Oooh The Magus. Read is years ago, it can leave one questioning the boudaries of reality.
As for The Godgame, I always wonder why, in the absence of any copmment from God so many people are ready to believe those who claim to speak on his behalf......
A good poem.

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2003
If that book inspired this I've got to read it! brilliant!

Adam

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Your work is always fantastic!
Best wishes
from
kay

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Very deep thought provoking write! ~~Z~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Deep and powerful write Erin!!

Enjoy your book!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 21, 2003
"The Godgame" is saying it all, and is saying it with words from the womb of the soul.

Long Healthy Life to You, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Erin....very deep and powerful write from you as usual.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
Very deep write Erin - superb :0)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
Reading about the magi(three wise men)prompts the brain to write as you have;-) Your poem provokes the mind and spirit, exploration of predestination reminds me of the theory that the big bang people have about eternity. That eventually the universe comes to an end then the big bang happens all over again , and this happens over and over again ad infinitum;-) and so it goes...

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
This was deep...a great write Erin....and like you I have to "steal" time to read...wish I had more free time...i do about 10-20 pages each morning...floria

Reviewed on September 20, 2003
A thought-provoking piece.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
I agree with John many thoughts as I read this. Excellent write!

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
Wow, interesting.
So many things went through my mind.
Nothing good to report. :(
John


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