I'm Aware That I Am Hungry
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Thursday, September 25, 2003
Hey, over here.
Can you see me?
I see you.
I’ve been
thinking about you.
Watching you,
watching myself. You’ve
occupied my mind,
sauntered through my thoughts,
footprinted my brain. I have
plans for your entrapment.
You are my prey. Pugnacious
and puissant. I’ve been
made aware
that I am hungry.
I’ve commenced my pursuit.
Come closer. I’ll be
humane, leave you your essence.
I see your hypnotized eyes,
am drawn by your
unwary anticipation.
My fingers ache
to clutch your mind. My ruse,
to dull your outer senses.
I am breathing
upon your sight,
closer, you’re falling,
right into my embrace,
penned. I lick
my satiated lips
as I slowly release you
from the enclosure
of my words.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/25/03
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Very good Erin.
Well done, Erin.
~Jackie~
"I'm Aware That I Am Hungry"...
- Accolades can feed Your soul, for Poet You have found from the gold mine of imagination - a historical and collectable NUGGET of thirty-three ounces net weight, - which shines and sprinkles its values to enlighten the Dens of Phoebus and Erato.
Poet Erin E. Moen, You make the apprentice-co-Creators feel proud of the Poets of our time.
I thank You for sharing "I'm Aware That I Am Hungry".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Excellent write Erin!!
Love Tinka
Chrissie
Come closer. I’ll be
humane, leave you your essence.
I see your hypnotized eyes,
am drawn by your
unwary anticipation.
My fingers ache
to clutch your mind.
clap clap clap....outstanding write.....BHUWAN
This is absolutely phenomenal!
It is your BEST poem EVER I have seen on your AD.
Ten thumbs and 80 fingers up!
You display a poetic mastery and genius sans egal here!
And that word, "puissant"... very, very powerful!
You have convinced me once and for all that I want to publish you in our general poetry E-Zine
POETRY IN EMOTION, but I have no openings until the Summer of 2004.
HOWEVER, if you wish to be the FEATURED poet in that issue, here's your chance.
Just send me up to 15 of your best poems (in your estimation) no longer than 40 lines each.
If you have artwork or photos to accompany these, all the better.
Send the poems in .rtf and .txt format please (2 copies) and all your artwork in .zip form.
I will inform you of my choices for publication sometime later this Fall, should you accept this invitation.
Poetry in Emotion is a poetry magazine with an ISSN (International Standard Serial Number) catalogued with the National Library of Canada.
Please note other members of AD:
I do NOT accept unsollicited ms. or poetry.
ERIN, please send poems etc. to:
vallance22.gosympatio.ca
or
vallance22.coolgoose.com
Merci!
Bye for now,
Riccardo