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Shifting Light

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, September 25, 2003

Shift the glare of sentient dishonor,
lance fast the brevity of rhythmic write,
fall into passion’s liquefied delight,
explode the myth of versified misnomer.
Shape true the tactfulness of worded pith,
reveal the gravity of language spent,
true sonnet flexes mind’s bedevilment,
avow, abide, prevail, in Master’s width!
Search not for innocence of fool aflame,
mind-blind with discomposure’s birthing rays,
old days are waned with shadowed final game.
Seek ever blaze intelligence portrays,
less fear illusions, lit by centered shame,
ignite the fright; torch ignorance away.

Erin Moen
9/25/03
Copyright 2003 ©





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Reviewed by Rhonda Taylor
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
Awesome... My kind of poetry!

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
I've never written a sonnet but I hear it's quite difficult. You kept to the rules without sacrificing substance. I'm impressed!

Adam

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 27, 2003
Wow! I'm out in the desert when it comes to sonnets. I wouldn't know where to begin. You are to be congratulated for you talent and eagerness to learn and master the many poetry forms. Your talent shows!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
Very well done Erin.....Damn, I hate writing sonnets tho...I'm bad at it! :|

Ted is right....Your a fine, fine wordsmith....ty, Dani

Reviewed on September 26, 2003
Never done one...so send me the quick notes...Excellent first attempt!

Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Yes, this does need some polish, misnomer, for instance. A good first attempt.

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
I am not familiar with the format of sonnets so this will be an interesting lesson for me. I liked it.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
this is lovely.
a nice piece of work. The time you spent writing this was worth it.

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Erin,
I am personally not into sonnets but as I expected I enjoyed your skill as a wordsmith as I always do. Keep going strong!

Reviewed by Marvin Kirsh
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
I agree-TOO HARD ON SELF-what ever you say about it stiil too hard on self-causes ulcers and poor health-illogical to do you either here in harmony or not with ulcers
Marvin(though who am I to say -my cigarettes give me a good charge and kick)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
You are way too hard on yourself.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Erin, What Jerry Bolton, below, said. Beyond that, wow, it seemed heavy to me, not sure I understood it all, but I never claimed to be too intelligent, LOL>! But as long as your happy with it, thats all that matters...peace, ED

Reviewed on September 25, 2003
I thought this was excellent, beautiful to read and enjoy tonight!

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
You should be proud of yourself Erin! Superb sonnet, and your topic wow! no wonder you lost a bit of sanity!Fantastic work!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Since sonnets (Italian or otherwise) is not in my realm of expertise I shan't prevail upon my limited knowledge to speak of it until a brighter light shows me the way. Oh, sounded good to me.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
your hard work paid off! Excellent!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Masterfully written Erin!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2003
Erin....I love this...
"true sonnet flexes mind’s bedevilment"
How true...I love writing sonnets and have not done one in quite awhile...I have to be inspired or I cant write one..this was lovely...floria


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