Shockwaves
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Monday, September 29, 2003
The silently sounding shouting is
surging louder and sharper
and she
begins to feel the buzzing vibrate
through her skeletal structure
as she
slowly stalls her spirit spins
with a distressing sense of loss
of a solid place to stand
so she
scoops out her soul
presenting
a sliding glass door that is
constantly swinging her sanity
and she
‘backs and forths’
so she
scrambles her hands
to her screeching mind
and into the slippery source
of senseless savaging
as she
softly sighs while shadows
surround her shockwaved aspirations
successfully soundproofing
her asphyxiation.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/30/03
This is just splendid! One of your very best poems I've seen!
Especially the opening verse!
The silently sounding shouting is
It just hits you right between the eyes!
You have simply GOT to submit this one to me for publication in Poetry in Emotion next summer!
Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA
You know how to spin my head girl!!
Love Tinka
Reindeer
Erin your hard work shows well!
A well written piece. Thank you for sharing.
Robin