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Shockwaves

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Monday, September 29, 2003

The silently sounding shouting is
surging louder and sharper

and she

begins to feel the buzzing vibrate
through her skeletal structure

as she

slowly stalls her spirit spins
with a distressing sense of loss
of a solid place to stand

so she

scoops out her soul
presenting
a sliding glass door that is
constantly swinging her sanity

and she

‘backs and forths’

so she

scrambles her hands
to her screeching mind
and into the slippery source
of senseless savaging

as she

softly sighs while shadows
surround her shockwaved aspirations
successfully soundproofing

her asphyxiation.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/30/03
 


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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Great write!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Clap clap Erin.....this is outstanding...I was spinning around it and got caught up in it...great write...floria

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Oh Erin!

This is just splendid! One of your very best poems I've seen!

Especially the opening verse!

The silently sounding shouting is

It just hits you right between the eyes!

You have simply GOT to submit this one to me for publication in Poetry in Emotion next summer!

Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA


Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Superb, superb write. Alliteration perfect!

Reviewed on September 30, 2003
WOW! Incredible write; excellent write, Erin! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Most excellent...you took me to a high...I could feel my head spinning for a moment!!

You know how to spin my head girl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
If its head rhymes you're after this is the place to settle in because Erin reigns surpreme.

Reviewed on September 30, 2003
most interesting shockwaves. Very good poetic expression. tk G

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Wonderful visuals

Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Good plotting, with the final shockwave a strangled flail.


Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
class act...powerful!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
perfect alliteration to a powerful poem...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Wonderful write Erin, and alliteration is superb!

Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Wow..so powerful, so very moving, I loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Simply Super.
Erin your hard work shows well!

Reviewed by Brenda Ross (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
I love all forms of alliteration. You are a genius, Erin. It is always a pleasure to read your clever poems.

Reviewed by Robin Spicer
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Greetings Erin,
A well written piece. Thank you for sharing.
Robin


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