Excellent! Your work is always worth reading. Your talent is amazing and inspiring. Thank you, Erin!

And it goes on every day...
Excellent!

With a name as Erin guess you blame us brits for Ireland aswell:)))))

Bravo, opps brava

Erin...BRAVA....BRAVA.... this is splendid..I will save this...floria

an outstanding write..Floreann

Wow, Erin, an amazing and passionate, furious write! Profoundly engaging! I salute the courage it took to post this one, knowing you'd risk offending some folks who feel poetry should not address such issues. Well done!

Profound and I always agree to read
your work. ;)

Erin, I can imagine all that you wrote and agree with it as a political statement, kinda! Strong and powerful write, keep em' coming, Peace, ED

Gets my vote.

A wake up call that cuts like a knife.

WE ARE ALL ONE <- A profound Truth

Everything we think, say and do has an affect in our universe which can be positive or negative.

~Joseph

Harsh words about (man)kind. We decimite ALL we infect? There is nothing good in this world of (man)kind? Nicely chosen words albeit a bit harsh and judmental. I think. But that's just me, I see that I stand alone here.

Strong, sharp, poerful poem with a sting Erin!!

Love Tinka

Excellent write on the human spirit...We are our own worst enemy!

Erin, very well written. It really makes you stop and wonder how it will be twenty years from now. No one will give a rat's a**. Excellent write. Sometimes I feel as though we bait our own trap.

Imagine a race run amuck
and its willingness to over suck
the teat of man’s greed,
zealizing its creed,
and ending up not giving a fuck.

Imagine the fanatics we breed
with our willingness to supercede
the hearts of Man’s life,
ever shoving the knife,
and causing all peoples to bleed.

Imagine the imbalance we protect
and our willingness to disrespect
the shrieks of the poor,
superiority ensured,
and decimating all we infect.


No need to imagine..Look around .. This is BRILLIANT!!!

Greetings Erin
I feel the anger and know it well.
This is cool.
Robin

Imagine the imbalance we protect
and our willingness to disrespect
the shrieks of the poor,
superiority ensured,
and decimating all we infect

My friend....well written my friend....Bravo.....BHUWAN

No shit, it makes you sick. Terrific poem on this subject.

Love, JC xoxoxo

Strong and powerful piece. Well written.

Very sharp and truthful...