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Halloween Dirge

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, October 5, 2003

As I shiver from their hunger,
pumpkins howl and goblins blunder,
witches scream with night’s delight,
echoing with hallowed blight.

Husband shrieks with orange glee,
kids yell “Boo,” no peace for me.
Please, oh skeleton on high
free me from crazy designs.

As I flee from spidered trees,
bats and cats show me their teeth,
full moon peeks and falls to earth
causing me to sing eve’s dirge.

“Woe to mothers who are not quick,
beaten down by candy sticks,
decorate your house alone,
lest you feel worn down to bone!”

Erin Moen
10/5/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
Gets me in the mood for the brood;-) Good one!

Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
You need to tighten the rime a little in this, hunger and blunder, high and design, earth and dirge. It makes the poem seem like a half hearted attempt at more formal verse. Also a matter of some loose abstracts, Orange glee is a bit difficult to grasp.

The last stanza is potent enough. Spidered trees is a good metaphor. Using me in the third stanza is redundant, you should replace it with sharp or something of the like.

Keep in mind I only critique because I care and appreciate your input on my poems.

Cheers.

Reviewed on October 6, 2003
excellent write, erin; so perfect for this spooky time of year! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Delightful write....LOL

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
HaHaHa....Great Halloween write Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
enjoyable read!

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
ah, i love halloween! you captured the spirit quite well erin. it is nice to read your work again! take care!

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
hahaha, Love this... my favorite holiday.. .great write

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
Great Halloween write!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
Delightful Halloween write....

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
Cute quote! The mother is harried and worn out I take it? I like halloween! I stay home and scare the kids!


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