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Melancholy

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, October 10, 2003

Flippant winds shiver the late fall foliage.
Chill whisperings foretell winter’s avalanche weight.
Along the fence, the mower has leveled the iris spears,
ragged, browning tufts of Bermuda grass are
entangling their spreading nature with chain link.

Rasping gutturals of crows echo hollowly.
Mulberry tree’s fallen leaves mourn summer’s loss.
Vivid green has turned into faded sunshine yellow,
draping the ground with Autumn’s last blanket of warmth,
entangling melancholy with linked chain nature.

Erin Moen
10/11/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2003
Beautiful nature write!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2003
The essence swells keenly in your words. Bravo!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2003
Erin.. when you metaphor and simile, you blow me down! When I read you, I find new ways to look at even the everyday things.. combining real with surreal, nature with human, I scratch my head, wondering 'how does she do this?' so consistently? and so so well?! No question about it: you have 'the gift!' Ahhhh, you surely do! love, katy xox.

Reviewed on October 12, 2003
Gee what an expressive remind me I have to cut my grass write. We've had Indian summer around her for several days. tkc G

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
I think for a moment, I was outside mowing leaves..
Wonderful images...

Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Beautiful and very moving Erin, I felt this one deeply tonight,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Nicely done, Erin...very melancholy, indeed.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
A melancholy tribute to the coming of winter. I love it.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Perfection penned here Erin!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Marvin Kirsh
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
just natures cycles-I like better your poetry of this type. Every goes through common moods-nature survive/conquer or figure out(control). Sometimes the world is very strange when things are at a still-something else moving-people can have more of a commonality in the flow of their lives than normal)
Marvin

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Wow !!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
your write teems with uniqueness. just thinking about the winter season, gives me a sad chill. peace

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Great work, Erin! You've evoked such bittersweet feelings while painting such vivid images in my mind! Thank you!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Oh Erin, that was so nice, so comforting in a way. I am definitely saving this to my library...goodbye summer and HELLO Winter, my favorite season...Peace, ED

Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Nice description of mood recombining ends works I think, here.

Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Excellent write. Beautiful!

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Ahhhh Autumn...my favorite season... and you describe it so well.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Beautiful,just beautiful.
I have a large mulberry tree in my backyard,mulberrys are still green though (I'm in Australia)I can't wait till they ripen,it gives lots of shade...your poem was very vivid and a great idea linking falling leaves and summers loss with sadness (meloncholy),I could relate.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Erin....perfect!!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
really like how you merged the imagery in this poem...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Erin, Wonderful imagery, beautifully crafted concept...


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