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I Don't Believe in Muses

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, October 14, 2003

I don’t believe in Muses, they’re just our mind’s excuses
cursing the loss of rhyme. Or in our delight,
when things go so right, we offer thanks to the gods.

In ancient Greece, flow of memorized reams
were essential to tell a tale. The needs of their Gods,
were conversely at odds, with diverting human fools.

These Gods were proud, their vainness loud,
adoration they craved. They claimed sanctity,
in their divinity, not caring for Man’s domain.

So Zeus ordered birthed, nine daughters of worth,
to create the music of praise. But this somehow seems wrong,
inception belongs, to all who hear life's refrains.

Now, the cosmos is wide, did always abide,
Greek gods were not the first. Chaos had rule,
endless Void was his fuel, a master of massive birth.

Silent twins did spring, with galactic wings,
eventually they spoke. This brought about light,
forming Day and Night, with Sleep and Death betrothed.

Orbal Gaia’s huge womb, extracted its loom,
and wove her skin new depth. Intuitive Mother,
without any other, softly began to chant.

I hope you can see, what other views can be,
I praise the human mind. Eros attracted,
Earth reacted, Poetry belongs to Man.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/14/03
 


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Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Splendid poem! Deep!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2003
Wonderful rhyme and flow, great poem.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2003
I'm awed. Once again. By your depth.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
An astonishing write Erin as you do so well!Wonderfully written. for me the creativity of mankind could only have come about through a higher power who placed the blueprint there to begin with. It may please us to think we create our own gods, but that's mostly intellect and knowledge talking, not wisdom...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
to me a muse is an attraction to a poetic conceit that offers me the inspirational focus of the gods...

superbly crafted and well thought out!


Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
I believe in Muses - this is a great poem Erin :0)

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Very daring, very REAL and very strongly stated!

A really bold incursion onto the summits of the gods.

Icarus would have been proud of you, Erin!

BTW, I love your new photo!

This is a fine poem, if indeed controversial, but, hey, isn't that what we poets are ALL about, eh?


Bye for now,


Richard Vallance



Reviewed on October 14, 2003
I do believe we create our own, Erin. Maybe the muse, or the lack of one, is the pent up fear we refuse or admit to deal with.... Very thought-provoking write.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Too deep for me, Erin.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Muses for me are something I HAVE to believe in using as they are sometimes the only way I can get a point across or not. I also agree wholeheartedly with what Daniel McTaggart states below...
So Erin, another of your prolificness (word?) flows forth & as always I like it and will save this particular one...peace, ED

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
I do believe in muses. They reveal themselves to me erratically and infrequently. And I'm not always able to absorb what they have to show me. But there are times when the floodgates stay wide open enough for me to flesh out their glimmer of inspiration.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Yes what is one man's truth can be another man's tale. Great write! Very thought provoking.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Heh heh heh...Erin...its just like santa clause....we do all the work and he gets all the credit...LOL....I adore this...it is a keeper and I will read it over and over...floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
The only muse I know is the "mouse" in my hand....lol!!

Love Tinka


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