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Salvia's Expiration

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

The original and the edited version of one of my first sonnets.

Friday, October 17, 2003

Oh, Salvia! I fear chill brings seasoned
expiration to proliferation,
alas, the waning such seems unreasoned
to temporaried incorporation.
I fear chill, blasé tediousness kills
rooted strength, red-tipped spires begin to wilt,
alas, the creeping covers blackened hills,
already frosted by blizzards of guilt.
Oh, Salvia! I fear chill dissipates
fruition, negating aspirations,
browning the blooming that anticipates
and freezes future of expectations.
Hie, Salvia! Expel your seeded girth,
implant your birth into my fecund earth.

Erin Moen
10/17/03
Copyright 2003 ©

Oh, Salvia! I fear chill brings seasoned
Expiration to proliferation,
Alas, the waning such seems unreasoned
To temporaried incorporation.

I fear chill, blasé tediousness kills
Rooted strength, red-tipped spires begin to wilt,
Alas, the creeping covers blackened hills,
Already frosted by blizzards of guilt.

Oh, Salvia! I fear chill dissipates
fruition, negating aspirations,
Browning the blooming that anticipates,
And freezes future of expectations.

Hie, Salvia! Expel your seeded girth,
implant your birth into my fecund earth.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/22/06
  


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on April 16, 2005
well done

Reviewed by Shannon Marlin (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Loved this one, E. Very different from your other work, but I can hear you and see you in these words more than some of your others....
smiling yet grieving; making a small ordinary thing into something to wonder over. Thanks for that, I'm smiling too!

hugs, Shan




Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Well, THIS certainly is DIFFERENT for a sonnet, folks!

Very original, and Erin's own unique style shines through.


Thanks,


Richard Vallance,
Sonnet Critic,
Poetry Life & Times (UK)



Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Huh? Whot? Da cold weather done got to yer plant? Aw, jeez, sorry Erin, how come it always get the ones you love? LOL I'm hope you don't take this the wrong way, I really liked your sonnet, and read it a number of time to get the rhythm of it. Very nice.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Beautifully written Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
Erin we had a heavy frost last night...I am afraid I have said goodby to my salvia and many other gorgeous plants...I am sorry to see them go...this was wonderful..I love your word usage....floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
Wonderful write!

Reviewed on October 17, 2003
Nicely-done!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
Wow! Erin, I'm captivated by this one, a stunner, beautifully done!


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