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Shadowland

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, October 21, 2003

Etching mime and constructing time, frozen
Words between the lines, haven created
In sunset’s glow, beckons with fiery show;
Shadowland devours all colors of rhyme.

Scratching at doors, shadows devour, craven,
The gloom implores, tip-tapping at eye’s mind,
The cringing kind, sinuously bestowed,
Shadowlands acceptance yields phantom time.

Reaching towards foggy throne, frostbit driven,
Hands break into shards, refracting truth told,
Reminders, icy wind begins to blow;
Shadowland encircles falseness of mime.

Beseeching recedes brief vestige of sight,
Converting heartbeat to shadowland’s light,

The knowledge brings no perspective demand,
Ego still plans to enter shadowed lands.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/21/03
      


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Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Like the rhythm of this one--kind of fast and halting at times which adds to the feel of the words. J.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Powerful piece! Shadows are a reflection
of truth aren't they? But perhaps they're
also an illusion we'd like to believe?

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
..."refracting truth..." <--- yes, I believe this begs the word brilliant. Erin, as surreal as you can get, I simply find bathing in your command of word, image and perfectly punctuated form a settling state. 'Shadowland' is where we think we don't wish to go, yet it's there.. It's easier to look at it with self-truth when I look at it with you. This is most impressive.. multi-layered, yet absolutely straight on! Jaysus, you're good! love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Erin, love the poem. This is one that can take on many meanings depending if one wishes to read between the lines. To me shadowland represents the dark times in my life. Very well written.

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
Interesting flight of fancy.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
Excellent use of words!

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
I like this :0)

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
Well done Erin!! : )

Jack

Reviewed on October 21, 2003
"Shadowland" goes on the way to be etched on the platinum doors of Poetical History of the twenty-first century.



Keep posting, Poet!



Thank You.



Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
Beautiful colorful wording and lines Erin...I love this one..I had to read this a few times...its deep...floria


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