I Thought I Knew Eternity
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Friday, October 24, 2003
I thought I knew eternity,
but speciously, I’d erstwhile seen
a continuation, deliverance
from fleshy mistakes,
from angst misplaced.
I don’t know, anymore,
if what I see belongs on earth.
Do visions shared divide
intent, does ridicule knit
its mitt upon our lips?
Perhaps the peace of steadied beat
blinds eyes to spiritual seat, questions,
there are always questions in our minds.
Upon our means of laded bliss, luckiness
entwines our fates, not giving thanks,
but showing us what to expect.
I have a friend who luck abhors
in realities chores, yet her luck
in ‘finding’ is unequaled.
Finding this and finding that,
aren’t we Time’s bitter brats? I see
hypocrisy abound. I’ve found
honesty brings sanctity, and comfort,
but that’s not what we need.
We need to know
if being alive
is worth
being alive.
Erin Moen
10/24/03
Copyright 2003 ©
Erin, I had a funny feeling this poem was yours, when I espie the title on AD home page.
It's brilliant, of course (said the mouth of the horse)
I am especially driven by this image:
Do visions shared divide
intent, does ridicule knit
its mitt upon our lips?
The rest is grand too!
Great poetry (as usual)
Riccardo
Your Canuckistan Friend
I have enjoyed the reading of an outstanding masterpiece.
"I Thought I Knew Eternity" made me know why it "is worth being alive".
I Salute You, Poet Erin E. Moen.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Peace, ED