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I Thought I Knew Eternity

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, October 24, 2003

I thought I knew eternity,
but speciously, I’d erstwhile seen
a continuation, deliverance
from fleshy mistakes,
from angst misplaced.

I don’t know, anymore,
if what I see belongs on earth.
Do visions shared divide
intent, does ridicule knit
its mitt upon our lips?

Perhaps the peace of steadied beat
blinds eyes to spiritual seat, questions,
there are always questions in our minds.

Upon our means of laded bliss, luckiness
entwines our fates, not giving thanks,
but showing us what to expect.

I have a friend who luck abhors
in realities chores, yet her luck
in ‘finding’ is unequaled.
Finding this and finding that,
aren’t we Time’s bitter brats? I see
hypocrisy abound. I’ve found
honesty brings sanctity, and comfort,
but that’s not what we need.

We need to know
if being alive
is worth
being alive.

Erin Moen
10/24/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Truthful statement...wonderful poem.

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2003


Erin, I had a funny feeling this poem was yours, when I espie the title on AD home page.

It's brilliant, of course (said the mouth of the horse)

I am especially driven by this image:

Do visions shared divide
intent, does ridicule knit
its mitt upon our lips?

The rest is grand too!

Great poetry (as usual)

Riccardo

Your Canuckistan Friend


Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
How true that statement is. Thank you for bringing it up!

Reviewed on October 24, 2003
"I Thought I Knew Eternity"... It questions for answers that The "Oregon Grape" let the cactus Wren have in its collected dews of wisdom the drops to shower the "Saguaro Cactus'" white flowers when it was known that the cactus Wren was near, for the daughter of Eternal Father knows that "She flies with her own wings".

I have enjoyed the reading of an outstanding masterpiece.

"I Thought I Knew Eternity" made me know why it "is worth being alive".

I Salute You, Poet Erin E. Moen.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU



Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
Your writng and questions are always so deep and meaningful, and well done...I believe there is only one place we can find the answer to your question "if being alive is worth being alive". It is within ourselves.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
The last four lines say it all for this poem of master quality, Erin.
Peace, ED


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