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Behind Eternity

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, October 26, 2003

The scream of agonized ecstatic rebirth
goes unheard on orbital Earth,
only a brief streak, a fiery sight
marks the death of a friendly light.

High above, patrolling the levels of Inner Space,
exists a crystallized gas breed of some god’s grace,
protecting this planet from Chaotic debris,
their duty ingrained, part of their creed.

Small and arrow-shaped, they swoop and swarm;
their radared eyes, keen as swords,
they speak in zings, they live to sing
patriotic dirges, of death on glorified wings.

Their enemies are metal based, swift
and sturdy, pitted, remolded with a gift
for destruction, in packs or alone,
their goal, to batter and break orbal-type bones.

Being strictured, metals have muted intelligence,
only base instincts to maim and crush,
fulfilling their destiny, not able to design
who they’d be, trapped under stereotyped lines.

Regardless of births and different fates,
our crystal beings confidently wait,
their religion proscribes a heaven at death,
a chance to fly through galactic breadths.

With eagerness to sacrifice Now,
to gain the door to God and grow,
they target their incoming cousins,
confident in their abstracted reasons.

The rest of the tale is sad to story,
Eternity created a game, in no hurry,
chuckling with glee, as we fail to see
behind the curtain, where It holds the key.

Erin Moen
10/26/03
Copyright 2003 ©

This poem and related concepts are copyright © Erin Moen 2003, and may not be reproduced in part or in whole without the author's express permission.


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Reviewed by Gerald Tate
Reviewed on April 20, 2008
Behind the curtain, where it holds the key.
GREAT LINE

Best wishes--Gerald J Tate

Reviewed on October 28, 2003
"Behind Eternity" is food to be digested in a long "SIESTA".



I read this three times in three days, and am still flying with the wings of imagination through the clouds of of man's history. This is indeed "Behind Eternity".



You, Poet Erin E. Moen, are at the gates of WINSDOM's PALACE, please keep entering into its realms.



Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on October 27, 2003
wow. i first thought of missles, then took it into another, more symbolic and astral level, but could not come up with any archytpes to fit your descriptions, still, these words resonated, and fit the mold of eternal war between good and evil...thoughtful piece, erin..i would be interested in knowing your motivations behind this piece...

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
I like how you view things.
I agree.
Excellent poem!
Brava!

Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Great thoughful expressions...and a stunning write.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

Reviewed on October 26, 2003
The rest of the tale is sad to story,
Eternity created a game, in no hurry,
chuckling with glee, as we fail to see
behind the curtain, where It holds the key."
Excellent, Erin!
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Wonderful expression of thought. Great write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Excellent piece Erin!!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Erin.. after two readings, I'm baffled.. oh, no, not at the poem.. but at the various directions you're taking me in here.. you've capitalized "Now".. off I go with women's rights.. 'rebirth'/reborn?.. religion took front seat.. language of space/orbits.. 'arrow-shaped' did me in! Your punctuation is impeccable.. I must rest easy that you have invited the reader to take what he/she will.. and THAT is something you do with incomparable grace. I just love the way you use words! katy xox.

Reviewed by Jason Ganey (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Very excellent piece Erin, thanks for shareing

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
COSMIC!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
"behind the curtain where it holds the key" Erin this is awesome...a most creative and unique write friend...floria

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
God. God! God? Oh, God, he can't hear me, everything is being zapped! See, Erin, what fantasies you made me conjure up? Scary poem and that IS EXACTLY WHY I LIKED IT.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
A stellar array of word usage.


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