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Moving in Time

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, October 28, 2003

Do I move you, do you feel me?
Do I make you want to flinch?
I give emotions that special twist,
want you to view my deathless wish,
to be forever etched, with my light.

Do you perceive me? I can see you,
your subjectiveness is up for grabs.
I take your emotions and design my rhyme,
revealing a moment’s fleeting time,
and capturing a piece of Mankind's face.

Do we comprehend our gift of mind?
Can we flourish with imagination primed?
Is it possible to carry earth’s weight
as we continually subjugate our wills
to practical restraints of limitations?

When we move past uneasy truths,
do we enter a different spiritual truce?
It seems impossible to escape
the neediness of a thinking race
who can’t believe in eternity.

Do we move time? Can we find ways
to elevate our souls above the earth,
that has taught us the rules of mutating birth -
evolution’s anxious crutch to stay alive -
while we have blindness of physical sight?

Do you move me? Do you free me?
Do you make me want to flinch?
You give emotions realities twist,
I want to view your deathless wish,
so I can be forever etched, by your light.

Erin Moen
10/28/03
Copyright 2003 ©
 


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Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Erin, I got to go with what Jerry Bolton said, I had to re-read it twice to get thru it, another masterful one, ED & Rufuz

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
wow..this is powerful. erin, you have a way of envisioning the spiritual side of things that makes it accessible...its a gift. i'm gonna be thinkin about this one for a while too...LOL

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
A scrambling of words to cause one to reread, and then again, the phrases are so elastic.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Brilliant! "I want to view your deathless wish,
so I can be forever etched, by your light"
Now there's a line! I do believe in eternity
BTW! ;)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
If this doesn't move the reader nothing will! Great write!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Do you move me? Do you free me?
Do you make me want to flinch?
You give emotions realities twist,
I want to view your deathless wish,
so I can be forever etched, by your light.

Very layered.. Bravo!!

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003


Oh shit, (man), this is fantabulistic!

There are so many incredibly mind-exploding images here, Erin!

For instance, this one:

want to take you to view my deathless wish,
to be forever etched on your mind, with my light.

and what about this little Shellian truth, folks?

It seems impossible to escape
the neediness of a thinking race
who can’t believe in eternity.

Well, Percy Bysshe Shelley and Erin Moen and Tyler Joseph Wiseman and Sara Russell and Bradley Alexander Bucsis and Robin Ouzman Hislop and Dani and and and ALL the poets I've listed as my favourites in my "blog" ARE the voice(s) of eternity....

as simple as that!

A MASTERPIECE!

Please submit for publication in Poetry in Emotion, Erin.

And, Friends, watch for this poet, she will go down in history as one of America's Emily Dickinsons. Mark my words.


Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA





Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
This was so very good, I love the mind bend in this one.
Allen

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
'my deathless wish,
to be forever etched on your mind, with my light.' Worthy wish. Good exploration of relationship. Good writing, Erin.

Carmen

Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Very well done...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Most interesting.


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