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Saturday, November 8, 2003

I feel surreal
irreparably peeled
a hell of a feel
intensely unreal
a ghost of life
a brush of sight
a passing flight
indelibly wiped
away today
I cannot feel
the things that are real
my life is ideal
spirits i steal
a phantom past
a dream collapsed
basically glassed
laterally wiped
get away
I am a wheel
don�t want to conceal
cannot reveal
a shade of hue
a ghoul of blue
that never grew
seemingly hyped
cemented in clay
toss me away
I feel surreal

Erin Moen
11/8/03
Copyright 2003 �

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Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

excellent!

Reviewed by Robert Montesino

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

Wow! This really kicks ass Erin!!! I likey lots.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

Yeah, thats the way I feel most of the time too...
That was a wonderful write, Erin, perfectly described being surreal.
I really only wanted to comment with one word being, "YES". But didnt think anyone would understand it...another masterful work from a masterful prolific poet! Peace, ED & Rufuz

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

Feeling surreal is a real strange feeling. Wonderful capture of this experience.

Reviewed by Helga Ross

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

There you go again, Erin.
You may feel surreal - You make me feel -- Impressed!

Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

Looks surreal, keep reading between the lines, perhaps there really is a secret to reveal

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

You made me feel the lack of reality expressed here -- so much, I'm almost out of words to express it. I liked the form on this poem. It reads quickly, almost as being tossed to the wind. Good job, Erin.

Carmen

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