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Sweet Treat Rainy Day

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, November 12, 2003

Sweet, this treat of rainy day
dispelling sun that blinds so long.
Look there! A cloud has come to earth
displacing green of mountain’s skirt!
Strip those windows, fling door wide,
inhale the smell of life divine!
Wait, too cold, close it quick!
Flop on couch, chin on hands,
watch the rain go drip, drip, drip,
feel the flow, the slide and slip,
eyeball puddle growing wide…
What the hell! Run, outside,
dance thanksgiving, open gate,
jump in puddle, walk in fate,
tennies sopping, inner glow,
glasses rain dropped, hair gone wild,
smile on face of adult graced!
Sweet, this treat of rain today!

Erin Moen
11/12/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2003
Thats it just jump into the closet puddle and have fun :-) Great write!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
Jaysus, Erin.. I'M THERE! Count me in! em.. but the tennies are gone! One does not romp in puddles with shoes on.. Ahem! This poem seals our fates: there MUST be a rainy, barefoot day in our future... this is the sort of thing I LIVE for! ooooooo... you have NO idea... well.. em.. you do now! (grin) Oh, how I loved this poem.. every thought it gave me... every drip drip drip.. god, I love rain! hehehe... C'mon......Let's gooooooooooooo... love, katy xox. (you bring the chips and dip... I'll bring the beer!) Wheeeeeeeeeee!

Reviewed by Lianne J (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
a lovely write

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
Erin, even us big kids get adventurous now and then. Excellent write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
Delightful write Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on November 12, 2003
adorable write, erin; thanks for sharing! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
This is cute... I too love the rain..and love the smell.

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
so cute
sweet, this treat of shared enjoyment

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
GREAT PIECE ....ERIN
I TOO LIKE WALKING IN THE RAIN

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Robert Montesino
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
I like this Erin, this one makes me feel free & flows to it's own kind of rythum, one that is sweet, one that is here now and jumps off the page with innocent exuberance! Delightful read! More like this one!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 12, 2003
Wonderful write, Erin! I love the rain, too.


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