Snowman Dancing Between Two Fires
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Wednesday, November 19, 2003
Poignant, its ecstatic mime, shortened
by manmade suns, but typical,
demise-begun sleds down
the long hill of the climb.
Acrimony burns its breath into flash
demands, cooling, as seasons
get out of hand.
Often times reflex storm becomes
blizzard's blazing greed to see
falling snowmen.
Melting provides opaqueness to frosted life.
Snowman cries out, and dies,
manmade fires reflected
in black coal eyes.
Erin Moen
11/19/03
Copyright 2003 ©
Carmen
Blessings,
Libby
Love,
Susan
**Applause***Brava!Brava!
Excellent work!
Thanks for my reviews!
and the last image of man made fires in his eyes are almost chilling. Greatly enjoyed!
in black coal eyes." Awesome!
It's meant to be read aloud.
The sounds resound.
Helga