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Snowman Dancing Between Two Fires

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, November 19, 2003

Poignant, its ecstatic mime, shortened
by manmade suns, but typical,
demise-begun sleds down
the long hill of the climb.

Acrimony burns its breath into flash
demands, cooling, as seasons
get out of hand.

Often times reflex storm becomes
blizzard's blazing greed to see
falling snowmen.

Melting provides opaqueness to frosted life.
Snowman cries out, and dies,
manmade fires reflected
in black coal eyes.

Erin Moen
11/19/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Definitely a very intriguing piece of work. I like your form.

Carmen

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on November 20, 2003
Intriguing write. Definitely works better when read aloud, I think. Helga is correct.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2003
Great write!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2003
Erin your verbiage is fantastic...loved this so much...floria

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2003
Beautifully written Erin. Loved it!
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
well written erin~!!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
Man made fires reflecting in the eyes....you gave this snowman life with your poem and with life comes impasse. Poor little man. Wonderful visions here.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
WHOA! Prize winner here!
**Applause***Brava!Brava!
Excellent work!
Thanks for my reviews!

Reviewed by Debra Brown (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
Hi Erin! So original, that first stanza is just amazing
and the last image of man made fires in his eyes are almost chilling. Greatly enjoyed!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
What a beauty! The finale is mesmerizing worthy of the highest accolade! "manmade fires reflected
in black coal eyes." Awesome!

Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
I enjoy your writing a lot, Erin.
It's meant to be read aloud.
The sounds resound.

Helga


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