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Weeping In The New Year?

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Monday, December 29, 2003

Do you see, my world, the gross gravity,
the unthinkable travesty, hating
differences brings? Sad depravity
of respect, constantly annotating

historical humanity. I weep,
my world, sorrow seeps, innocence is dead.
Do you see, my loves, are we half asleep
with eyes soldered shut? I cannot keep dread

out of my head; will we survive ourselves?
Do you see, my peoples, we must embrace
diversity. If you can’t save yourselves,
who will? Not all feel invisible grace.

Do not weep, my world, we are distinctive,
surely our salvation is instinctive.

Erin Moen
12/29/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
Weeping for me seems to flush out the emotional system, good for us all...Excellent thought and write, Erin...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on December 30, 2003
Wisdom in Weeping. So much
truth here Erin.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 30, 2003
Such is life!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2003
We do manage, somehow.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2003
Eyes soldered shut, speaks volumns, quite something is this...

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 30, 2003
Erin, such a powerful piece. Love this line, " will we survive ourselves?" We are definitely our own worst enemy and only this realization can assure survival.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
We all weep for humanity and the suffering ,but do we ever weep for the creator who gave us salvation,yet everyone resents Him because He isn't to our specifications...just a thought your sonnet evoked, not towards you...

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
:) I used 'peoples', Helga, to show I am not talking only of 'my' countrymen, or one religious persona, but all men, of all individualities of perspective and all diversities in all our countries on this earth. I constantly have the statement, "We all put our pants on one leg at a time" in my head. It is a statement of union. Why can't we see that? At times, I wonder if an extraterristrial visit would effectively expound that point to such a degree, it would be a world-wide awareness. I am a little more unsure of the 's' on brings; should it be bring? Travesty and gravity seem singular...one of the idioms of grammar I have problems with, silly, yet, the potency of the piece could hinge on that small aspect.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Hugs it does get scary sometimes doesn't it? Great write.

Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Another fine sonnet Erin, of finest thought.
I like your style of expression.
Plural "peoples" the only 'flaw' I find, which I admit, in this context, is a matter of personal taste.



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