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Melancholy II

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, February 20, 2004

Brisky winds are frisking,
trembling daffodil heads,
nodding and shivering,
I feel their quivering,
as if I were in their beds.

Garlic’s spears are rearing,
saluting Winter’s chill grip,
solid and sturdy,
I feel their fury,
mourning warmth’s swifted trip.

Sound of chime is climbing,
tinkling as gray skies race,
clearly resounding,
I feel their pounding,
relishing awakening’s embrace.

Erin Moen
2/20/04
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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Alright, me sweet Cheesehead transplant.. let's see if I can stuff it all in here:perfect internal rhymes: check.. marvelous aliteration: check.. clever metaphors and similes: CHECK.. cadence, rhythm, meter... Poet Laureate would be a step DOWN for you, my fine friend. You are not to be nibbled... I gobbled this up whole! Jays. you're good! katy xox.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
"Mourning warmths swifted trip", what a great line, Erin, as is the whole poem as always...some of yours I find hard to understand without a dictionary and thesaurus, but this one is wonderfully easy and a thrill to read...Love it, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Great write Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Erin, I loved this!!!!

clearly resounding,
I feel their pounding,
relishing awakening’s embrace.

...Michael

Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Erin, this is fabulous....wish I could get you to Canada to see our winters...brrrrrrrrr....Excellent my friend.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
You gripped my soul with these verses, Erin. Thank you for this offering. Regis

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Hi Erin...great write....we have grey clouds racing with strong
winds...I guess winter is not going to go out so easily...I
always love seeing the first of anything green popping up...like
renewal of life....loved this ....floria

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Very 'cool' I have something coming up in my back yard, looks like onions, wonder if it's garlic??? lol Great poem and TY for the review on my daughters poetry. She'll TY herself when she gets back to Dallas.

Love, Janet xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Great descriptions!!!


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