Sun-Birth
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, March 6, 2004
Low, sun shows shivering shadows, head breaks
Earth’s crust, horizon events orb’s first flush,
impels birth pains, never letting up, aches,
with fresh life, then creates a sumptuous hush.
Bird sings slow, stuttering warble, voice flings
airy hymns, scoring light, to reinvent
musical genesis; entreating wings
fly into chill dawn, trilling warmth’s intent.
Glow, shafting silky soft gold rays, again
you favor earth’s enamored seed, gifting
all forms of growing, souled source of light in
cold black space; your rising, so uplifting.
Rejoice! Sun ‘s axis tilts, bears heat close, to
cosmically inseminate anew.
Erin Moen
2/6/04
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Keep up the outstanding effort,
It must pay off for you and you deserve it so.
Your old pal,
Kevin
a hush that roars with renewal and rebirth ... excellent poem ...
Love tinka
Great work Erin....floria
excellent write.....
and it's all revealed in the alliteration, the image-provoking words... your muse speaks through you. While you are 'lost in thought' I
have the pleasure of being 'lost in words'... yours, my dear! You are simply divine. love, katy xox.
~Chrissie
Reindeer