I like the Ideal,and feeling but i would and it's just my sugestion
distill it down to bare bones...i think it needs to be edited down less words...but it's good enouhg to stand alone either way
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
distill it down to bare bones...i think it needs to be edited down less words...but it's good enouhg to stand alone either way