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a construct of the mind....
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My first 'poem', as opposed to haiku, in sometime.



“Where are you from?”
It was a question more difficult
then she knew, or intended.
There is nothing left there...
I've been away too long for that.
My hometown has become
a construct of the mind,
a physical place no longer.

It is all real, all still real
the people, the locales,
the events, beads on a string.
My mind has strung them
artfully arranging them:
A creative construct tied
not to geography and time
but to memory . . .

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Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on June 3, 2004
good!

Reviewed by Meva Onyurt (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2004
A poet is the one who can make you feel and see a different aspect of existence amid sameness and constant simulacra.
This poem is written by one of them.
(Thanks for the advise by the way)
Good luck

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 8, 2004
John - are you talking about me?! Suddenly felt like I "owned" this poem and that you had uncovered a truth about my life that I have never before been able to put my finger on! What a joy - and I've only just met you!! Trouble is, my "string of beads" is very loosely tied and ready to come undone at any given moment; and the beads themselves seem to vary from day to day, too! Not too sure that I really have a handle on what my "objective truth" is!! Great write and pleased to make your acquaintance. Thanks, too, for visiting my page. Loved your "Background info" on your home page - really identified. KB

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2004
So well penned with some profound thoughts.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
Outstanding!!!
arranged well

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
Most outstandin John!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 6, 2004
very creative ... really like the ending ...

Reviewed on April 6, 2004
This was outstanding! Very well expressed, That picture was intriguing,

Reindeer


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