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To Go Where The Tracks Take Me
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Like the wind the railroad is both a powerful symbol of and a stimulus to wanderlust.
(see also "It's The Wind" and "the hole")

This is very much a W>I.P




Sally learned back in the coach seat
as the train pulled from the station
her face lit up as the bell rang good bye
“I'm like this old’ train. said
“I go where the tracks take me/’

All that day we listened to the clackety click
music of steel wheels rolling on steel rails.
“That steel wheel music is my theme song.”
She stretched “My traveling music
as I go where the tracks take me.”

For years we followed that big iron road
tied to nothing but that steel rail song.
The Clackety click was our love song, our
march, our lullaby. We spent our youth
laughing at those who got stuck off the rails.

That ride was many long and weary years ago
the line, like manifold others, has been torn up.
The road ended for Sal and I:
I found a not too uncomfortable
sticking place, she followed the tracks…

But when I hear that clackety click
of steel wheels to steel rails singing, I wonder
where the tracks have taken her.
When I hear the whistle moan in the night
I wish that I had what I have not: The courage
to leave here and go where the track takes me

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 Reviews of "To Go Where The Tracks Take Me"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
This stirs memories that I had long forgotten of travelling across the country on those old trains to visit relatives and the feeling that I always wanted to keep on going.

Fee

Reviewed on October 21, 2007
And I thought it was only I who lacked the courage to go where the tracks take me. A wonderful and insightful write. Makes me remember the train rides of my youth, trains to me were always magical. PLB&G. <Mikii>

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Reads like a memior. Even at coach prices, one had to have wealth not to ride the rails or box cars.

Nostalgic, that's for sure.

Ron

Reviewed on October 21, 2007
John,



I really, really love this one; I, too, wish I had that courage! Well done, your best yet.



(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Me too...e


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