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naked
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Standing in your parlour
“I’m to old to be coy.”
You say as the dress falls
and you stand naked before me:
Naked and defiant and vulnerable.
Honouring me with your trust.

“Take me.” you whisper, but i do not.
I run my eyes over your body
There are scars, and marks and
imperfections. My gaze is piercing
but you do not flinch from me. Slowly,
I strip off my clothes, piece by piece,
revealing the story of my life.

I kiss each scar and imperfection,
of your body and soul,
with reverence and with awe
for these marks have made you.
I kiss them to bring you healing:
Just as your touch and tears and
nakedness brings healing to me.

“Take me,” you whisper again, “take me, now”
And, in the perfect intimacy
of our shared nakedness
I do...

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Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
very good

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
How eloquently romantic!!!!
You have a romantic soul...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
Incredibly beautiful write.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
passionate, eroticism at its best...

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Beauty from within...without - I enjoyed this poem of passion John :0)

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
John, This is beautiful and so tender, all lovers should take it as a lesson on true passion and intimacy.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
Wonderful writing--love the loving passion and
tenderness within it, the trust, and the fulfillment!!
What vulnerability!!!! But, oh what reward...

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
This is what love is, after all the real beauty is within, excellent.

Nancy

Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Hey, I really liked this work. In this day when the perfection of the body is blown so far out of any kind of reality, when people spend thousands hiding scars and wrinkles, it is awesome to read something that has love and acceptance written in to it. Thank you so much.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
This is a classic write John!!

A real gentleman penned this!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
In was as if I were watching a movie. Great write.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
This is as it should be! Great write and understanding of true love.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
John, that is so very beautiful, thank you for sharing it, now I ned a cold shower, LOL! Peace, ED


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